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Passionate Feelings Stirring (Part 2)
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Passionate Feelings Stirring (Part 2) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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Holding each other closely, We snuggle in front of the fire With feelings stirring lovingly within us, Passionately We gently caress each other With touches light as feathers Our bodies feeling as if on fire With searing flames of love We slide down to the plush rug Lying down slowly, we tenderly kiss, A long kiss with passion and desire (to be continued) [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-03-2003 10:56 AM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
That'a a good place to stop, least you move this poem to the adult section. Smiling here...very well done. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
steamy hot! very passionate! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I know, Pat....  As I was writing it, all kinds of things were coming to my mind. Then, I thought about the same thing you said about it being moved to the "Mature Content" section. I decided to wait so I could choose my words better. I like poetry with a little flavoring, but not overly spiced... HaHa!! Thanks for reading and replying.....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Dixie..... I have to be in the mood to write this kind of poem. Like I told Pat, I didn't want it to get sent to Adult, so I decided to quit for now. I'll write more of my ideas I was having while writing it, lster. Maybe I can not say things to make it get moved. Thanks for reading and replying, friend....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is nice and sensual without being too revealing, and its a little risque for you, from what ive seen before of the loveydovey stuff, but i like that too, and this is cool. for me tho, i would like to really turn up the volume, and be my graphic, pornographic,slutty self, but i think i would end up crossing the line even in the adult forum, so i just try to keep it clean in here, like it down on the rug too - hows his knees? |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
One can be sensual without the burn. Taking your time is a good thing. Will look forward to part(s)3...and 4...5? |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, this is sooooooooo beautiful, I've had these dreams for so long and all I wanted was to make my Joanna happy and feel my first kiss from her and now I'm left dreaming these dreams not knowing who I'll share them with if ever! (sad sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I wish this happiness to always shine for you and Gary as you are so deserving of it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
inkedgoddess, I did get a little more brave in writing this poem. My Love and I send each other a lot of mail when we aren't together, so we write each other stories now and then. But, I doubt I will ever put any of those on here. Thank you for reading and liking my "loveydovey" stuff............  "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Richard, yes, you're right, I think. And, I posted part 3 this afternoon. Don't know about other parts, yet. I really don't want to be in Adult just yet.  These are more about being "in love", instead of the actual act. But, I think you know that, don't you? Thank you for reading and replying, Richard.... "Love makes the world go around" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Noah..... Thank you for replying. And Noah, please don't give up on love. You have so much love in your heart to offer to some lucky girl. And, might meet the girl of your dreams when you least expect to. That's how it happened with me and Gary. We were friends for a while before we fell in love. And when we met, we certainly weren't looking for anyone to be romantically involved with. He was going through a very bad divorce and my husband hadn't been dead for very long. We talked about everything constantly...and still do talk a lot. We know each other very well. Anyway, I know that if things are really over with you and Joanna, that you will meet someone else. And I hope that it will be real soon, friend.......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
this is so special. and so sensual. i like! keep 'em coming ethel, you know i love them! lots of love, gem xxxxx  learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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jeffwillett Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 86Texas, US |
A litte too *wink wink* for me...but a very nice poem indeed |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, Jeff, Vandana, James, I was going to print this poem off and I noticed that I hadn't responed to your replies. I'm very sorry that I overlooked this. I really do appreciate each person reading and replying to my poem. Thanks to all of you. "Love makes the world go around" |
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