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Bedroom Eyes |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
See in times of quiet hours Faint perfume and summer flowers Everything that you may be Rests inside the pools of me See the shimmer painted blue Flame too hot to wander through Every way there is to be Lights inside the heart of me See the deep among the stars First to know this love of ours Every moment to be willed Full to brim desire spilled See into a dawn reposed Felt in flushes as exposed Everything desired so Sparkled here for you to know Copyright Kkh 1/13/03 |
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angelfriend Member
since 2003-01-11
Posts 52Michigan USA |
I really liked it. Nice images and a good flow to it. Sounds like a very warm fuzzy going on here. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
See the shimmer painted blue Flame too hot to wander through Yep, know it well... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Another great, romantic love poem. If you have a book of poetry I'll certainly buy it, but it would be priceless, you couldn't place a value on it. (But, if you ever do let me know, all kidding aside) This is so beautiful. Really enjoyed. Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
The whole poem is wonderful, and this line is exquisite. everything that you might be rests inside the pools of me Simply splendid  [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (01-14-2003 09:10 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Kathleen, this so deeply touched my heart, sweet friend, I long so much to look beside me and see my loves eyes, which I hope I will find sometime in this life and ever see sucha wonderland! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is really lovely. Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Absolutely Charming !!! ... feeling everyword .... ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Simply beautiful..and so true for me....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
absolutely charming, agrees with WhiteRose about that line, my fav. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - another great one by the diamond... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very beautiful Kathleen. Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs & Smiles~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Doe eyes, bedroom eyes and sleepy eyes, ok.. not bad TD...and surely not a surprise!! Nicely done my friend... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
it really is all in the eyes, after the well, you know what i mean here |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, ThisDiamond! Cor |
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