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Drowning |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England 
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The water is rising I am sinking Drowning Never coming up for air Reaching out Screaming out in pain Drowning Un-noticed by the world Falling Like lead weight in me Drowning Suffocating without air Dragged down I can’t find it in me to refuse Drowning Maybe I don’t want to breathe I’m hiding Hiding from the world Drowning Down here it’s cold but safe Drowning Drowning in my own tears. *Im going through hell at the moment and this is the only thing thats getting me through, being able to express myself, I feel totally insignificant & like nothing I say counts. This is somewhat my otherwise silenced voice. These words are me gasping for air.* small insignificant useless me |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
cant you find us there too? theres a lot of us drowning, youre not alone |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
keep on writing...and please know that you're not alone |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
as i read this i remembered a song i once heard when you're standing in deep water, bailing yourself out with a straw when you're drowning in deep water, and you wake up making love to a wall well it's these little times it help to remind it's nothing without love....Jewell lots of love hun. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I liked this alot.. made me view you as stubborn though in a good way  And keep coming for air... Its nice to breathe and blink a bit. Keep hope, keep writing. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I will toss you a life preserver. Hold on tight, dry land is nearby, though the air is not always sweet at first deep breath. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rm711 Take a deep breath and let it out slow. |
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