Open Poetry #24 |
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Diamondized |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
Diamondized heated up and polished you shaped yourself until light danced through you but when the sun left and the rain stayed your glass fell apart and you were nothing more than a castle in the sand "It is like looking for a blizzard in a glass snowball. Unless you shake it up not one flake will fly." |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sounds like a cheap imitation..and you deserve better than that.. nicely written.... now I am off.. I must get on the road. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Short and sweet, enjoyed. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Just proves that 'diamonds' are not always a girl's best friend. Well written, sad. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Helen...this reminded me of one that I've been working on for over a year now...enjoyed the quality of writing but the disappointment conveyed in word just aches... |
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