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Open Poetry #24

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Ixtab
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 105
MEXICAlpan de las tunas

0 posted 2003-01-16 01:05 AM

To love is to seize
to die is an earth release
a waking torch
lights dreams of living in peace
untouched
unspoiled..

but the flame,
engraves de names,
civilization,
prometheus..
logos..

in childish hands ignites

Are we ourselves?
history is a deck of mirrors
a fun house of distortions
built over the cementary of dreams..

Pass the torch to life
and all will live..
for love is no word
words banish

we are here.
to try.
for eternity goes beyond our skin..
faced upon the end

what will give?
.
.
try
, Ixtab, cielo13.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-01-16 02:03 AM

for eternity goes beyond our skin..
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great line
nice to meet you, cielo 13

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2003-01-16 10:49 AM

smile...and every time I love? I find I have to redefine it. It's an evolution...

enjoyed the illumination from your torch.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-01-16 10:54 AM

"History is a deck of mirrors..."

I see some nicely written metaphor here - Well done, Ixtab...

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