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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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My heart, composed of broken lies and memories so soon grown cold the tears well up within my eyes this life so lonely, sad and old. My heart-a shattered bit of glass a crumpled dream of used to be Remember how we meant to last? but now our us is only me. My heart is hidden now away the plaster thick to make repairs but nights in dreams you always stay and look-there are no bloody tears. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
catalinamoon~ Very heart touching write. Hope this is not an actual experience of yours and if it is I hope your heart heals soon...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, sweet poetess, such sad words. Hope all is well with you. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hey Sandra, nice to see you writing again. It’s been a while. You know, I’ve known this heartbreak, and I only hope yours will ease soon. Hugs to you You can never win or lose |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Though this is sad, it is beautifully written. Thanks for sharing....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sandra~So nice to see you here. Sad yet well penned write which was much enjoyed. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so sad, but beautifully written. I'm so glad to see you post again. I hope all is well with you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so heartaching, sweet friend, this made me cry as I wish for your heart to find comfort and love you so much deserve! (sad sigh) My prayers are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Only thing wrong with dreams......is waking. Enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hmmm...well done, and brings thoughts of old days, many yesterdays, and sadly, also todays [This message has been edited by passing shadows (01-13-2003 04:39 AM).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
and look-there are no bloody tears. Cat, this is a keeper4me... My heart hugsUpoetFriend... *~coco~* |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
this was completely sad to me, but maybe i'm strange because i find a certain dignity in being merely one....... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, A goodly write, I might have reversed cold and old. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
In words, there is healing. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sandra you just wrote my entire life right now........and did it very well. Hugs hon... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
when you come back to write you do it with such grace, Sandra. Missed you hugss M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra, a touching and well written write from the depth of a lady we all think so much of... Good to see you around... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - write those tears away, suddenly they will leave... Sad heartfelt write... BC |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
So well written, yet so sad. I liked the title, too. You captured a broken heart perfectly. Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Give it the old heave ho Sandra...Once we have cried a river and filled it with our tears is when we learn to row our own boat! But that doesn't keep our dreams from coming back~ This was sadly beautiful~ Be well dear poetess~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Cry it out, Sandra, and maybe listen once again to the Bee Gees. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Repairs and maintenance, costly ... and deep. Wish you well my friend. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression of your feelings...James |
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