Open Poetry #24 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast ![]() |
I have been hosea ten times and never obedient but have missed the women of wind as though they were children there are thick pages there and I have dreamed they spoke not with words but with neon and grooves that fit my affliction she will drift away with the clouds the sun will take all but her outline and I will put my hand to my face to look at her between fingers as the stones were people then when they were young under the sky eventually they will be again when they become dust in water I will be hosea again and listen ©Dark |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
last line does well... enjoyed as usual... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Knowing what Hosea means in the literal sense enlightens this piece tenfold... |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) How beautiful it is to see something that looks digitally enhancing but is actual size and organic in its beauty! (big hugggsssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Hosea is hard to follow, enjoyed. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
He's baaaaaaack! nice one. Cor |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
You really do amaze, I have never come across anyone, that can touch poetry like you do..... ![]() L~ I sing to life |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Nobody writes like you DS....nobody. ~Hugs & Winks, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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