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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2003-01-12 01:18 PM

Ahhh, but to feel the morn of dew,
the breath of fresh in recline of rays,
the moment of a whispered kiss.

This, that I wish, felt as are the swells
of mighty waves, the roll of a river in roil,
the fall of waters clear.

Sip the vine of me, as I tenderly taste
the bubbly of you, softly stroking the
harp of your soul...as I caress the morn
of a dove’s flight, soaring into the
light of shimmering eyes..soft as down.

Strum the soul of me in a rhapsody of
elegance. Strike the strings a yearning
song.

For in this hour, this breath of breathe,
my words spill from lips wanting but
to be tasted...as I taste your own..
passionately, freely till the dew
falls the vine into a wine
of treasured sip.

angelfriend
Member

since 2003-01-11

Posts 52
Michigan USA

1 posted 2003-01-12 01:59 PM

Nice way to wake up it sounds. How romantic. Love the imagery.

"The only gift is a portion of thyself" - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-01-12 03:34 PM

Oh wow!!
Oooh myyy yesss Barry!
*Speechless here*

~Hugs & Smiles~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2003-01-12 03:58 PM

enjoy your read

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-01-12 05:02 PM

Goodness, Barry....very romantic and sensual......

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

5 posted 2003-01-12 05:16 PM

Yo Sir Magnus, did you take all the batteries out of your fire alarms when you wrote this? I think you're going to melt a few hearts with this one. Excellent write. I bow to you and yours.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-01-12 05:24 PM

classic love poetry, enjoyed this

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-01-12 05:27 PM

sure beats just falling off the bed

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SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

8 posted 2003-01-12 05:29 PM

Magnus,

Tis been awhile since I've had a chance to visit. So glad I stopped and took a little glance inbetween the wild times. You are a breath of fresh air. You have awakened my passion and stirred my still heart. Thanks.

SimplyGold

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2003-01-12 06:32 PM

And fan upon the seas with the breath of angeled wings...
Always a beautiful write. TD

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

10 posted 2003-01-12 06:43 PM

Barry, this is just wonderful....the romance is oozing all over the place.

Hugs, Marti

Most of us go to our grave
with our music still inside of us.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2003-01-12 07:30 PM

(sigh) You plant seeds of pure romance and make real olive branches that always ripen with the real oils of purity and comely love! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

12 posted 2003-01-13 09:38 AM

Let it be morning forever... These are some pretty lovely thoughts, P.I....

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

13 posted 2003-01-13 10:26 AM

Romantically delicious.
Sandra

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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

14 posted 2003-01-13 12:27 PM

Simply lovely Barry. A wonderfully soft read.

enchantingvamp
Member

since 2002-12-21

Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!

15 posted 2003-01-13 12:36 PM

MAGNUS, i have to say i love reading your pieces, i always feel like i take something wise away with me, enjoyed this much!

Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

16 posted 2003-01-16 05:21 PM

Well, my dew is darned frozen,
but if it could have,
THIS would have
melted it...

[reminder to self: go out and read Magnus' poetry to the roses...see if they bloom...]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

17 posted 2003-01-16 06:07 PM

Sip the vine of me, as I tenderly taste
the bubbly of you, softly stroking the
harp of your soul...as I caress the morn
of a dove’s flight, soaring into the
light of shimmering eyes..soft as down.

Damn Barry. Your last name isn't 'White', is it?

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

18 posted 2003-01-16 07:30 PM

Barry - excellent write, romance of words from the best...

BC

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

19 posted 2003-01-17 05:39 AM

Yummy!!!!!!!!!!!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

20 posted 2003-01-18 02:27 PM

Breathtakingly beautiful, Barry! So beautiful!

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