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wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2003-01-17 11:54 PM

The baton would start
Tapping
At the slightest slight

And set into motion
Hells’ own orchestra

Mezzo Forte

Taut strung strings
Plucked
In pizzicato

Struck
In staccato

Pounding temples
In Timpani

Forte

Dynamic curve
In augmented 4ths
(the devil, in music)

Dissonance
Crashing in Crescendo

Tutti Forte

The sound and fury
Of this familiar piece
Affects the Venue

Much like, but unlike
The Shofar of Joshua

Coda

[This message has been edited by wranx (01-18-2003 11:35 AM).]

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

1 posted 2003-01-18 12:14 PM

the symphony of wrath..
love the
temple pounding build
and the fall
into
ruin

Ed?
these pieces, I think,
are your finest work yet
you have had others
that gored like a bullet
but these?
sustained brilliance
tight
riffs
of reflected
ice

poet as popcicle
love ya bro
B

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-01-18 12:38 PM

The sound and fury
Of this familiar piece
Affects the Venue

I hate to see the series end and the curtain fall, but all good things must come to a closing...and it's been a fascinating read.

In your wisdom you have left many good thoughts behind~

Thank you for all that you've said and all that you are.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2003-01-18 12:41 PM

Now I feel guilty for tryin' to rush your brilliance. Beautiful finale and coda, wranx.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-01-18 08:11 AM

Ed's opus? I hope the ending of this piece is the prelude to another. You've created a wonderful series here, and I'll be saving each one of them in my new "Ed's Opus #1" file.

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

5 posted 2003-01-18 08:19 AM

the weight of this...
was worthy of the wait...

Excellent writings, all seven. Thank you, Ed

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2003-01-18 10:44 AM

I think we need to find more topics for you to pen in your style of cleverness and wit...for I hate to see seven come...
Im sure me and Karen could come up with some more mothy sins

lol
Excellent theme writing poet sir..take your bow.

It's over long before her fall from grace, she's never been this far from safe.
Trying to see where it all began, she'll never be the same again.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-01-18 02:29 PM

A brilliant piece wranx, the musical terminology and tempo changes added a swirling feel to this. I favour the russian composers but then i'm a dark bastard

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