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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Left Coast She’s been thinking of the coast, fingering a pink shell worn around her neck for luck; recalls spent days floating on mercurial waves, hot-cold sand between toes and grains gathered in cupped hands; back when she was sweet in a two-pieced suit, letting summers drift. © 2003 Core |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yeah, kinda like the days when I was about twenty, and everything sorta fell into place just right.... Cor. This is a very beautifully written piece...I could feel the sand and the warm sun... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I almost felt those warm sands slipping in this one, Cor. You always give us vivid imagery. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Easy to see... a treasure to hold. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne A warm and thoughtful write, enjoyed. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Corrine, I'll be glad when summer days (and nights) get here. I love the beach. Now, about the two-piece suit...there have been better days...HaHa!!  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Those were the days... I like your thoughts, C...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
my coast is ten minutes away...and I would have to be mad to get out there in my two-piece right now! good thoughts, I miss the coast, even though it's right in my back yard. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I can only say..again, You do this well. Ed |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hey sweet poet, I think she's still sweet.  Keep those memories floating, even better get back on the water. Hey and where's that pretty face?  Parker |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Your words always bring me home |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Excellent words but then they always are and my replies seem redundant when commenting on your work.sigh |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, I just thought of the beach reading this and just wish I could live there everyday! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hey Magnus - yeah, I know what you mean. Those were the easy, carefree days. Sigh. Thanks! Thank you kindly, Midnitesun. Awww, thanks, Sunshine! Thanks Sey! I'm with you, Garysgirl! Yeah, two pieced-suit - oh well, they always came off in the waves anyway! hee hee! Thanks, sweet Nan! I'm jealous, Passing Shadows. Careful, you'll have a bunch of roudy poets on your door step! Thank you very much, Ed! Park, Park, Park! Where you been, boy? Awww, thanks! Well, got tired of that there pic. Will just have to get another one. How's life treating 'ya up North? Home. Thank you, Ruth! Yep, that's home to me, too. Aenimal - don't sigh, I always enjoy your comments - thank you! Me too, sweet Noah, me too! Hope things are looking brighter your way, sweet one. Cor |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Hi again sweet poet.... well the good word up here is snow, and more snow... maybe its not that good of a word #$53@! lol Life goes on as always, been around and not writing.... cursed muse. Can't wait to see a new pic though.  Park |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Ah, beautiful and whimsical...and filled with memories. I really enjoyed this...excellent poetry.  *Krista Knutson* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Nicely done and leaves the reader with that longing for both what was and what could be... as for the two piece suit... I'm sure it would look better than you think... |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Nooooooow I wanna go to the beach..... lovely piece, write on! Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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