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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-01-11 08:30 PM

Some moments spent, a few words sent
A message by my heart lament

In from the cold, so warm to hold
In blanket seas my soul enfold

Some dreams shared white, into the night
The single purpose to delight

Another wish, on fickle fish
Into the distant miles swish

Some tales to tell, in smile to spell
And all of me is cared for well

Some moments shared, and romance dared
Into your hands my essence bared

Copyright Kkh 1/11/03

bluRaven
Junior Member

since 2003-01-08

Posts 18
Richmond, VA

1 posted 2003-01-11 08:35 PM

Truly moving.

"~Sometimes you have to forgive someone because you want them in your life."~~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-01-11 08:38 PM

Smiling, wondering who inspired, and
an extra smile at the word "fickle"...
my grandson and I spend a few moments
each week together...
and our word of last week
was to rhyme fickle...

thanks for the revisit
of the smiles he gave me,
and the ones that you must have received
from writing this.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-01-11 08:39 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Kathleen, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry as this is so lovely and had me wishing for this love I have lost recently again! (sigh) I wish for this true joy to always fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-01-11 08:53 PM

Excellent my friend...and the triple
rhyme worked very well for you...

Well done!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-01-11 09:00 PM

Extremely well done Kathleen!
Much enjoyed the rhyme scheme here.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-01-11 09:17 PM

liked the flow, the rhytm and the topic very much

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-01-11 09:35 PM

ThisDiamond - like your style of comfort, sure do...

BC

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-01-12 12:05 PM

Your words are so smooth and so fine,

and continue to flow so delightfully.

Thank you TD~ It is always my pleasure!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-01-12 02:19 AM

very touching

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

10 posted 2003-01-12 05:55 AM

smoooooooth, and quite lovely!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

11 posted 2003-01-12 10:35 AM

Very lovely. I enjoyed this a great deal. Amazing writer, you are..

Warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

12 posted 2003-01-12 10:39 AM

well done...much enjoyed...

believe in what your heart feels...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

13 posted 2003-01-12 11:06 AM

unfolds beautifully

like a gentle caress of thankfulness

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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