Open Poetry #24 |
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Before the Quiet Dawning--new, but Revised |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Before the Quiet Dawning I stepped into the blackness of this winter morning a tiny, solitary light shone silently in heaven’s abyss as I reveled in the promise of a break in the clouds, a dog echoed my delight as it greeted the morning’s wakening it was not a sound of mourning, no, it was a rejoicing my heart joined his excited about the light to come at day’s breaking yet now, I sit, watching pockmarks of rain form upon the patio beneath the gray bowl that envelops us it had been a star or a planet that was only teasing or maybe, just maybe it was giving assurance that beyond the cloak it was still there though unseen, it did not make it unreal a statement of “keep the faith... I Am real." ©January 11, 2003 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (01-11-2003 11:38 AM).] |
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since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Virginia, you, your poetry .. are most assuredly real!!! Well done. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Oh, this is really nice. I love that ending. Very well written. Enjoyed. warm regards, Pat ![]() ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a beautiful write! love the ending line! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Virginia, hope you don't mind... this seems particularly appropriate to bring back up on this Sunday... Thank you. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
really nice and full of light and hope and all good things for a somber sunday on the heels of yesterdays tradjedy |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Virginia~ This is beautiful...I enjoyed. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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