Open Poetry #24 |
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field of dream |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Here I lay by myself, I have no one else to hold, Yet in my dreams, I see the fields, And I see you waiting there, You promised me love and you promised the you would wait, But now I stand alone, I stand in this field of dreams, We touched, We kissed, and now you walked away, So now what? where is my love? SO now all I do is walk this line, I know that will never be enough, But what can I do when I lost it all, What do you want now that I am up agansit this wall, I had a dream and it was sweet, But now I wait on that field, and now I hold onto them dream girl until she is finally real. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Michael, Awwwww...May all your dreams come true. Don't know if about yourself but it seems a little sad. Hope it works out. Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one day...just have patience. Yes, nice write! |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, with patience...your dream girl will appear...usually when you least expect that you will.. |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Know the feeling man, keep writing .... it's a good "release valve" ... There is no normal life Wyatt, just life ... so live! |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
well I am gald that you all liked it I am not really sad I just think it would be nice to have her but one day save I have faith and just keep moving |
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