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Edge Of Impact
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Edge Of Impact |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Upon the edge of impact I sit and take in the view miles and miles of scorched earth where oceans once stood destroyed without warning by hurtled rock But I still remember Love, waters running deep and seemingly endless |
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jeffwillett Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 86Texas, US |
Very nice, short, and to the point...my kinda stuff |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
if you remember, then you know its there, somewhere, somehow, okay? |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
this is different, my kind.....direct and descriptive~! I likes~!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Raph, well said... Been keeping tabs on asteroids lately? Miles and Miles would be an understatement...grim though fascinating. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks jeff i'd written more but it became redundant and i do prefer the shorts ones too yeah i remember inked i just need time and a divining rod Thanks Tone glad you likes it lol magnus only internal ones lately |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
deep ey? i just thought of an eminem quote- "my words are like a dagger with a jagged edge..." don't stop striving to the highest! peace to your smoldering universe |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Loved this one Raph.  Wish more people believed love was as eternal and untouchable as this. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Raph, May you always remember love...I, too like this and upon re-reading, find it quite deep. I agree with the last post, about eternity....best wishes to you re: your internal ones (magnus)... Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aenimal Interesting write, enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, me too... nice pic there, good to put a face with the name |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks GOidless and again i have to say i just love that name Rainbow i have to admit sometimes i'm not so strong that i see it Thank you Pat for the warm wishes Thank you Seymour as always Thanks passing, as for the picture it's solarized and a little distorted so I'm not sure the real me comes off quite as interesting |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Raph, it feels like were sat looking out on the end of the world as it smoulders burning til its end. like a scene out of the lord of the rings in mordor. where everythings black and lifeless. hopefully, it wont take you that long to find it again. though i do enjoy your dark side so dont find it too soon! actually, this wasnt even a dark one was it? it had hope. i'm rambling. again. i'll shut up now. very much enjoyed. lots of love gem xxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Gemma as if i didn't like enough already you had to mention lord of the rings and now I'm forced to like you even more |
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