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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“FANTASIES REAL” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I dream of a cottage in the forest, sequoia growing touching the sky, a lake serene at peace with stillness, as warm breezes flow calmly by… A place in thoughts enchanting, perhaps with faeries to sing to me, gathered as I lie in tree shadows, voices heard soft in melancholy… Fantasies real of a romantic being, to see all things of what are anew, this earthly place will always be, one found when I think of you… ~~~~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
bill , i dont know, can it ever be this swell on earth, i think i truly need to leave the planet to feel so over the moon these days |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Bill, I love the way you do these. Makes Fantasies feel real, for sure......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Bill, I really enjoyed this one! Where would we be without our fantasies? I have them all the time and quite frankly...they keep me SANE!!  * That which gives light, must endure burning * |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderfully romantic Bill! Much enjoyed the fantasy. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*battin eyelashes* I know of such a place.. smile.. In fact, I have a telescope set up on a platform near the wood. Think I will put on a jacket and go see what's out there... loved this bill...serene poetry indeed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Bill, this is so deeply beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry only imagining how good fantasies can become if only you look to the right coordinates on that compass rose! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Bill, What wonderful thoughts.... like: "a lake serene at peace with stillness" Enjoyed the tranquility of the scene... last line, perfect. Such romance, you write. Enjoyed. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautiful romantic visions Bill your fantasy glows Hope |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Bill Charles../\..very nice; quite calming; thanks.. ../\..Spiros --------------------trees-------- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Romantic is the word, well done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I dream of things like this too...nice write! |
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