Open Poetry #24 |
Red Earth Images |
A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
you are the aqueous sway that tempts the layers of her flesh arranged by your mouth she is lost in the sighs, linger apparition that lies sleeping in the red earth she needs the sweet scent of fingerprints and the sensation that provides comfort when the atmosphere is purifying and merciless scrape the walls of her womb with your image but do not use or abuse for she is vulnerable smoky lips moist and rich in the texture of illicit dreams |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry creates the nicest atmosphere! Beautiful images and feelings ATOV~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Very sensual write...passionate in the softest of points. ThisDiamond |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
BluesSerenade, you always make me feel good, thank you ~Lady~ I do appreciate your kind words! ThisDiamond, Hey I like that name......Diamonds are a girl's best friend after all *S*~! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to respond.you are a Gem~! Atov~~~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Lady, I was gone from my computer for a while and didn't see you here. I like this poem and the way you wrote it. It's beautiful...... so more folks can see it..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
quite suggestive...welcome to piptalk |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
garysgirl Thank you for stopping bye, it's good to see your name again, you gg are like sunshine bright and cheery.....and I do appreciate your words!! ecrivan, I like to write softly suggestive, leaving a lot to the imagination, the blanks are to be filled in by the reader.....Thank you for the welcome. *S* ~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~ |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Very soft and sultry....and all in good taste. Very WEll Written ~~!!!!!! ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a good place to be, "lost in the sighs" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
first I've read of yours, me be thinkin', me be thinkin' it won't be the last, either!!! Fantastic use of language in your word-weaving. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Salty Very soft and sultry....and all in good taste? Smiling here, well thank you Ms. Salty, what a nice thing to say~! Midnitesun a good place to be, "lost in the sighs" Smiling...I agree, *wink* Thank you Midnitesun VAS, Such splendid words of encouragement, thank you very much *S* ~Atov~ |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"moist and rich in the texture of illicit dreams" yes, yes, YES!!! Enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Sandpiper, Thank you for dropping in and leaving such nice words for me to digest. Yes, Yes, Yes, you are greatly appreciated *smiling here ~! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
When the red red earth is not appreciated for her immense beauty, the despoilment has begun; ah, but when lovingly taken care of, she can be the utmost sinful delight! ATOV, your words echo in my mind and reverberate within my soul. Great to see you! Jeff |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! I love this! Very very nicely done! ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A Tone of Voice You dance the symbols well, enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a bit of a painful feeling I got here...so you know I can relate and I like it! |
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