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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2003-01-10 10:21 AM

The smile that you give
is like warm fire burning
smoldering, slowly...

Lasting are embers
stirring within our desire
passionate flames...

(c) dmsmith 01-10-03

I know that you can 'read' me
but can you 'hear' "me"?

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (01-10-2003 10:23 AM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-01-10 10:22 AM

Donna, these are very, very beautiful.....
Thank you...

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-01-10 10:46 AM

yes slow burn...

enjoyed...

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 2003-01-10 11:02 AM

Keep those fires burning...

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2003-01-10 11:57 AM

Very, very nice. Wonderfully vivid, I especially like the 1st one!

Did you see my attempts yesterday? They're titled "Silly, Unrelated Senyru." They went toward the bottom fairly quickly. Maybe that's a sign.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-01-10 01:38 PM

Very very sensual...lovely Donna!
~Smiles & Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

6 posted 2003-01-10 01:43 PM

very nice

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2003-01-10 02:01 PM

this is so lovely....so soft, and I love the title!!...hugssss you....

L~

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2003-01-10 02:31 PM

Beautiful Donna. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2003-01-10 04:58 PM

sensual ru
lingering lashes
of lady

enjoyed it hon!!
D

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2003-01-10 05:52 PM

Both romantic and sensual, I love it!

hugsss

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2003-01-10 05:55 PM

Gentle Spirit
A lovely write.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

12 posted 2003-01-10 07:26 PM

Perfect, Donna. This style suits you.
Sandra

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

13 posted 2003-01-10 07:52 PM

Beautiful!!

Charisma

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2003-01-10 07:59 PM

nice

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

15 posted 2003-01-11 05:09 AM

(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Donna, this is so very gorgeous, sweet friend, I wish for the embers to never fade and for the fireflies to always light in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

16 posted 2003-01-11 01:19 PM

what a picture here!

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