Open Poetry #24 |
In Faith Sy, - I love it this much. |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
In faith we speak the poet's creed to reach out to those souls in need, to paint the truth and offer more through words of hope and artist's score. The black, the white and sullen grey are held within our grasp today each one supports, the others' there, a dream of faith to show we care. And who can tell who's holding who for each supports with feelings true and in the circle sealed by love we, all give thanks to God above. Connected by our inner core, we speak the words of faith and more. We hold to faith, with words of kind and show the way from bitter bind. We hold on tight lest fear should grow from knowing all the things we know. We walk by faith to hold onto the others wavering, from this too. Holding close we meld as one and share this faith beneath the sun. in faith, believing, all is well, with outstretched arms from poets' tell. And thus we find the way of peace to hold faith tight brings soul's release Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (01-10-2003 05:03 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kethry this is so very beautiful.......hugs.... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Kethry, This is outstanding, direct from your heart into mine. It flows so well and the intent is just so special. Enjoyed. Hugs and warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
wonderful words my friend...and so well done they can not help but express the feelings of many here.. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
i'm at the point in my life where, i'm kinda experiencing things that pull me farther and farther away from God. your faith brings my faith up, thank you. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth beloved one, if it were possible to capture the spirit of your beauty, if it were possible to sculpt the essence of your soul then the result would stun all who saw such wonder. In this delight you have complimented and placed Sy’s etching in just the right setting. There are those who doubt that you are the poet I claim you to be, but no one who has a spark of empathy with art in their soul will doubt that you have written the perfect accompaniment for this wonderful piece of artistry by Seymour. You know that I love this utterly utterly utterly, it truly is beautiful in both its style its form and its perfect flow Love you always And forever Slushy Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
I've always had faith in you Keth. This is an outstanding piece of work darn, should have a bit more faith in myself though, forgot to change back into me LOL Titia Life on the internet begins at...90! [This message has been edited by Muys (01-10-2003 06:42 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful work Kethry!! Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh my gosh, this is just outstanding. The picture drew me in and your words just captivated me. Brilliant dear one...hugs, Marti Most of us go to our grave |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kethry, Thank you dear for blending the two together. An excellent write and a keeper. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A special thanks to Sy, who sent me this etching and reminded me, that there are good things in life that hold true long after the memory is faded. Thanks to all who stopped by. I pray that whatever you take from this work will lift you up and keep you warm. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You have brought together the picture with the poem and left a feeling of love, Kethry. You ARE a poet... and I am pleased to say I know you. |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
what a picture, this fit perfectly with the images and I love the idea, I too cherish the concept, we are ~one~! *S* ~Atov |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just beautiful...dont' know another word |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Sometimes we do, and when we do it's wonderful. I like this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Kethry, this is lovely, sweet friend, in faith we understand and we understand faith through faith itself! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kethry..this is amazing! So very very beautiful! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - outstanding, written only as you can do... BC |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
I am very lifted and very warm! Thank you so much for such a heart rendering poem and pic. It's a wonderful rendention of LOVE!!! Kitty |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice..James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a beatuiful tribute to the poetic voices btw. who is the artist? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
inkgoddess, the artist is Seymour Tabin, this is a copy of an etching he sent to me after the poets' meet. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In faith we speak the poet's creed to reach out to those souls in need, to paint the truth and offer more through words of hope and artist's score. The black, the white and sullen grey are held within our grasp today each one supports, the others' there, a dream of faith to show we care. And who can tell who's holding who for each supports with feelings true and in the circle sealed by love we, all give thanks to God above. ==================================== We hold on tight lest fear should grow from knowing all the things we know. We walk by faith to hold onto the others wavering, from this too. Holding close we meld as one and share this faith beneath the sun. in faith, believing, all is well, with outstretched arms from poets' tell. ================================== Keth..this is a written masterpiece that compliments a sketched masterpiece... how fortunate we all are to get to share in the magic of the both of your talents. You found the wisdom and truth in Sy's lines and wrapped it in your rhymes. Excellent writing girlie..a wonderful inspire and return of a gift. It's over long before her fall from grace, she's never been this far from safe. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kethry, all I can say is, ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL, and thank you..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And I love this... absolutely beautiful presentation! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Inspiring and uplifting write Kethry..I'm so glad you post this!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Splendid write dearPoetFriend Kethry... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I bet when you finished this, and read it out loud, you smiled right? I knew that feeling only once, when I nailed one dead on and this dear lady is dead on for one of the best pieces I do believe I have read. It is certainly now my absolute favorite of yours and I didn't think I could ever find just one! Congrats Keth. ~ The soul lies buried in ink that does not flow ~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kethry~ This is absolutely gorgeous. Love the poem and love the etching as well. This is definitely my favorite of yours as well. Beautifully done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
Stunningly beautiful and true, adore the picture. Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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