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jeffwillett
Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 86
Texas, US

0 posted 2003-01-09 06:00 PM

-Singing Lobster-

What If I was a big red lobster?
And I had big red claws to.
Every time that you came near me,
I would sing a song for you.

That would make me a singing lobster.
There's not too much more to say,
But do you think you would run and hide,
Or could you just be okay?

What If I was a singing lobster?
Do you think you'd be my friend?
I would not want you to run away.
I don't think my heart would mend.

If I were just a singing lobster,
I do not think I would see,
I'm no more than an ocean dweller,
What else can a lobster be?

This is the first "light-hearted" peiced i've ever written.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-01-09 06:05 PM

Nothing wrong with the lighthearted approach
here Jeff. Keep working at it...you may
surprise yourself..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-01-10 04:22 AM

cute

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

3 posted 2003-01-10 04:40 AM

a lobster in hot water????

enjoyed this cute poem
smiles, cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 2003-01-10 10:45 AM

Anybody who can write a poem about a lobster is OK in my pot of rhymes... Do you do chowdah as well???...

MattGarcia
Junior Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 19
Texas, USA

5 posted 2003-01-10 11:12 PM

interesting, jeffrey, you truly have gone insane....j/k man

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

6 posted 2003-01-11 12:41 PM

a singing lobster !!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

well now i've heard everything

my reality is now obliterated by this undersea revelation

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

7 posted 2003-01-11 01:45 PM

Beware Sir Balladeer
an exterminator by trade
for singing you may be
a lobster it is said God made
to be the coackroach of the sea

Thanks for the smile and keep working at it.

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