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She Weeps
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She Weeps |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
She Weeps Everything had been left behind not so very long ago, but spirits harbor their own signs as she was left to know that time will come as time again like the spirits say, for time will render all its past and trip us on our way. She weeps for what she does not know and weeps for what she does; she carries on, a silent show and though the motions cause A turn of face, a wayward grin a silent turn of heart, everything had been left behind in begin of a brand new start. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
touching... and heartfelt. nicely done Lady... I don't have any disappearing ink...so I'll not write a reply... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is so heartfelt, sweet friend, I wish for comfort to fill her heart and all others who feel this way and for love to do the healing! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Love the "wayward grin" Wonderful poem, enjoyed. Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful...very.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, I will take this for myself, my library, to keep and cherish always. A beautifully sad write. Very touching to me. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
like the positive note |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
ouch this hits home great read but ouch |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lady In White - your words are very precious Lady... BC |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
LadyInWhite, your poem is soooooooooo touching I cannot begin2tell you just how some of the verses here just tug at my heartstrings... I shall treasure your poem in my library and look4ward to reading more of your poems here on these pages blue... Smiles2u PoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow! How did I miss this one dear Lady? Beautiful...simply beautiful. ~hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
She weeps for what she does not know and weeps for what she does; she carries on, a silent show and though the motions cause A turn of face, a wayward grin a silent turn of heart, everything had been left behind in begin of a brand new start. Love the poem. Hate new starts. lol |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
well now, I am glad this one came back up..... I needed it today.... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lady, this is so winsome with its depiction of silent tears. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
kind of melancholy but hopeful, |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
We go on, because we must. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
As she weeps, new doors open before her... Hopefully she'll step through them... Lovely words, Lady.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
each day I read this and for just a moment my heart quits hurting.... thank you.... |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
wow, this feels like a piece of your heart. i am honored to have read it. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Dear Lady, your words are so light and lovely. Thankyou for this. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lady In White - another touching write... BC |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Beautifully written as only you could say it. Shenachie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can see the "me" in "she" |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Some very telling replies... thank you all so very much! |
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