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Does anyone have a spare towel?
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Does anyone have a spare towel? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Taking showers no longer washes away the dirt. No cleansing rain diminishes the pain. No work no gain. Left in the dust, choking rust covers my once shiny visage. Spare me your dime, I'm out of rhyme and lost the time. No amount of soap will clean up my act. Does anyone have a spare towel? |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Kacy, they sure do come in handy sometimes, don't they??  "Love makes the world go around" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
heartfelt, sad...but with sort of a light side. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
wachya gonna do with a towel? Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ethel, I need a whole closet full! Shadow, I have to keep it light for survival. Kethry, good Q.  maybe just cry?I'm OK, it's the rest of the world that needs a KING size towel. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-07-2003 08:00 AM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Time for a good long deep cleansing soak... Perhaps air-drying might be the solution... Nice metaphor, m'friend..  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun You mean a crying towel? LOL enjoyed. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nan, Does that mean we should get blown away? chuckling at the visuals...Sy, thanks for crying with me for a minute; now let's go play in the sand while it is still under instead of over our bodies. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
EXCELLENT!!! that's all I can say Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Kacy, i don't have a spare towel but we can both use my towel..that should induce some comfort, yup? anyway, regardless of what you have done to make yourself so filthy, i'm sure the ones that matter won't mind one single bit... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFLMAO at your reply, Kaile. Hope that towel has a sense of humor. |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
I've got a spare towel Kacy, except it's ripped and kinda shredded at the bottom from getting caught in the washing machine. It's the thought that counts though right? Great poem!The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
A towel? Nope, but I got a spare scrunchy. Deb |
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