Open Poetry #24 |
Today |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Today Today my mind is whisper still. Listening for the whippoorwill. Gentle sounds that ride the breeze Stimulates that touch of tease. The beauty of a butterfly The varied hews in golden skies. The slightest dew upon my door The whispered touch of nature’s awe. The mystery of a meadows lie The magic of the sun on eye The fragile scent of earth in mist The spirit of the essence kissed. It’s there for all to touch and share. Within the earth and wind and air. It is the milk of human need. And we, the spread of apple seed It is the miracle of you. It is the only final view. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May I begin your morn just right, and whisk away the dark of night? May I be the candle's light and be a glow within your sight? Good morning Sy! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
YOU are the miracle, Sweet Sy... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I really like this poem,Sy!!!! The blend of nature and emotion into such beautiful images makes for some very uplifting reading.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
What would I do without my sunshine. Nan, And you are my angel. scorpio You just made my day. Thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh such beautiful words Sy.. Very lyrical and uplifting read this morning. Very much enjoyed. ~Hugs & Tea, Nancy Lee~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress Hugs back and have a good day. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, This is especially beautiful. So much to touch and share is right. Happy day to you! Feels good re-reading it, it flows so well. Thank you. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pat, Thank you for the read and like. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You set the sun and hang the moon, your rhymes even make nature swoon. Your mind may be whisper still ... but your verse instills and thrills. ~~ Winkiewinkie Stinkylove |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you sweet for the lovely answer and I got your email. Glad your all feeling better. WWRS |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
seymour, do butterflies still flutter in sunny florida through NY's january's freeze? very very lovely |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vandana Thank you so much for t he read. inkedgoddess Yes they do and thank you for the lovely. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - Oh, I am so glad that I didn't miss this to-day. I was too busy to read it this morning. Just lovely. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Thank you so much for taking the time and trouble to read and comment on this. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It’s there for all to touch and share. Within the earth and wind and air. It is the milk of human need. And we, the spread of apple seed What a lovely verse that is! You be the poet man Mr. Tabin! So sweet this was! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Mr. Seymour, This is especially beautiful... so cheery and delightful........ Thank you... "Love makes the world go around" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy~ I absolutely love this...so beautiful. You've put a smile on my face today...thank you. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BluesSerenade A lovely reply, thank you. garysgirl Thank you for the read and reply. vlraynes Thank you for the hugs and hugs back. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) An apple a day keeps the doctor away so the logical approach is to take Johnny Appleseed's word and spread the seeds on and on! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think even if it didn't post your name with the poem, I'd know who wrote it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, And bless you back my friend. passing shadows How nice of you to say that. |
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