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Lay Open the Envelope
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Lay Open the Envelope |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Lay Open the Envelope one thing as one shan't e'er do to see flesh only as fair beauty open this the envelope of me experience more than you could see 'tis all I should ask of you sagaciously see my orb of gaiety and fathom some intimate mystery witness within the lee of me this envelope that is for thee and not for all the world to see in this envelope seek a multitude of things, as shy erudite wisdom, burning bright that would for thee as ochroid word shall sing long and true into the depths of night see thee what this envelope would bring that this envelope would envelop thought of what confidence might be sought of what indeed this envelope brought once now that your attention is caught indeed, 'tis so, t'would it be your lot to envelop the envelope that carries me in these words that you in solemn solitary see 01.07.01 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
stamped or postage due? ( grinning) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ochroid? as in ochre? a yellowed/aged reference? brain tesing me again, heh? [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (01-06-2003 03:27 PM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Yes Karilea...open the envelope..read not only the letter but between the lines...very intriqueing write.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh yes...much enjoyed this dear poetess! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
My... The envelope please.... Very nicely done KJ, yes, we should look and see what is inside as well as what is outside, shouldn't we? |
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rainman Junior Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 21 |
for many people out of the envelope is the most important...not thinking of what's inside... i liked the way you have emphasized this..well written..thank you!!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the title caught me, the poem captured me |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Perhaps, I see hints of McKeuen in here. Ready to be post paid. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Our "envelope's" have surprises inside sometimes..... some good, but some bad....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
"AND THE WINNER IS?".........WHOEVER YOU WROTE THIS TO... |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
ah yes, so much more for those who will take the time to read what's inside--enjoyed, very creative perspective!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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