Open Poetry #24 |
Not everything is written in a book |
rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England |
Not everything is written in a book Not everything is politically correct Not everything is straight down the line Not everything is scientifically correct So shut up You think you know everything When really you haven’t got a clue You don’t know about emotion You don’t know about grief You don’t know how it feels to be lonely And you don’t even know me Not everything can be explained in math Not everything correct comes from your mouth Not all your opinions are right to me Not anything you see in me is real So shut up You think you know everything When you haven’t got a clue You don’t understand that I’m nothing like you You don’t realise that I’d hate to be the way you are You're so blind you can’t even see That you don’t even know me Not everything in your mind is correct Not to me and not to the world Not that you don’t hold some truths But you doubt other peoples views So shut up Yeah you should have your own mind And you should disagree But never downcast me Just because you can’t see Anything the same way as me. "Some men see things as they are and say why? I dream things that never were and say why not?" Rosie Mitchell [This message has been edited by rm711 (01-05-2003 02:59 PM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
ugh at those who really thing they know everything. Can be quite disgusting and when your trying to grieve or get through something or whatever they pretend to care and make some fuss of how they did it ...sometimes it cover on their part, sometimes their just sooooo clueless. And, sorry, got off a bit there. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
nice rant, it's always good to get bitterness out of your system. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whoohoo! I gotta let my brother read this one! Wow! |
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Kristine Member
since 2002-10-30
Posts 92Mahal Kita!!! |
very nice poem, I really enjoyed reading it! Kris Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
shame on those myopic people who think they are so right and aren't receptive to the possibility that other views are acceptable too... you go, dude! i hope you felt better after this rant... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you definitely got your point across althought the phrase "shut up" always sounds so rude. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
rm711 enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You sound a little mad at someone...James |
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