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Within Our Spirits We Know Love / Duet with Gentle Spirit
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Within Our Spirits We Know Love / Duet with Gentle Spirit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Within Our Spirits We Know Love There are lessons born from memories past so many things in life we have been taught regrets and joys mixed with happiness and tears but through it all, added strength they have brought. And here we are, each having a heart laced chambered in passion, in shadows of sighs in war of emotions, that play out their scenes serenity, in search of, each morning we rise. Stinging of tears, too often felt in pain hearts mend to move past sadness and sorrows, to see clearly through the ominous clouds seeking better and brighter tomorrows. And here we are, no yesterdays in play, the reviews of the past, silenced by time adjustments, changes pen tipped to flowing dancing to tunes of life, new ones in rhyme. With each written word, souls begin to heal yesterday’s gone and is held in the past, but the future will be that much better through experience our lives will be cast. And here we are, in skillfulness of words embraced in shadows, each night to suspend two souls to be guided, in passions new to be treasured, each, our thoughts we transcend. Having lived and learned, knowledge is power into unknown destinies we will roam, courage and strength living within our spirits loving ourselves, we are never alone. ~~Thanks to Donna for the start of an idea that we finished together.~~ [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (01-04-2003 02:29 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I envy you both....beautiful writing! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice Duet from two very good poets Gloom |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~M~ and Donna.... How very lovely, written by two who can capture the heart, soul and mind so very well, singly, or as proof with this beautiful poem, together. Enjoyed, Hugs and warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Congratulations ladies on a beautiful duet! Extremely well done and much enjoyed. ~Smiles and Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank You All, I hope we got across what Donna wanted to...that as women we are strong enough to get through the hurts and sorrows of the past and cross the obstacles of day to day living and still succeed. hugsss M |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ladies~ Now that's what I call a duet. To read one of you at a time is an honor, but too read both of you together is twice as nice.Enjoyed very much...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna and Maureen Especially this: "loving ourselves, we are never alone." Tremendous with importance and true...life has some hard knocks, but each can make you strong and more sure. Seems you both are that, and more. Great duet of two beautiful spirits. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Congratulations ladies on a beautiful duet! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There's no better combination than the Gentle Spirit and nakdthoughts of love. Kudos to you both~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I wanted to thank you all for stopping in and reading. I hope that this left you with an understanding of the message we were putting forth. Maureen, thanks much for writing this with me. I appreciate your time and willingness to help send the message out. Thanks.  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Donna and Maureen, Now THIS is poetic weaving at it's best. Excellent! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Bohemianaus Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 69Australia (South Gippsland) |
Your optimism is delightful Boh |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very well done. You two write very good together. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen and Donna, this is so beautiful. Both of you are such talented writers, how could it be any different? And, you are both very strong and gentle spirits......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Ladies this is a wonderful duet on the strengths that are born from endurance. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Love the combination of your words...a nice duet for sure. Thank you for sharing your talent today. Very nice read!! ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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PoeTik JusTice Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 186California, USA |
Wow, sooooo good! Looking at this poem, only being 16, makes me hope to be able to have as much talent as I grow in poetry! love it so much! XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I just wanted to take a minute to stop in and say thanks to everyone again. This write came from a comment made about how over the years through many struggles we have endured.....and learned. Thanks to all, and PoeTik it is very nice to have you at Passions. Welcome aboard! M...again, thanks for the duet! |
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