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MattGarcia Junior Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 19Texas, USA |
hey, i wrote this a while back and it is sorta a true story, so tell me what you think. -Love Lost- Life can be tough at times. You may want to end it sometimes. Why wont this pain go away? Nobody ever made me feel that way. When I was with her I was free. I could be whatever i wanted to be. But her feelings just weren't there, and we vanished into thin air. I gave her my heart, And she tore it apart. I see her with him now, And I ask myself, how? How did we get here? This is what I always feared. I guess i must let her go, but my love will only grow. |
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jeffwillett Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 86Texas, US |
I hear where you're comin' from bro...all in all a nice poem...like i just told you, it's like all of mine, some parts flow nice and some don't...haha |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Very good and very relateable!! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Matt. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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MattGarcia Junior Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 19Texas, USA |
that is really cool to see my poem on that card like that, thx alot. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Welcome to Passions...and for those of us who are much older...nice to see that the world has not changed regarding love... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Good first post. Many inspirational people here...hope you enjoy this place as I do. ThisDiamond |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
Welcome to Passions!Wonderful work!And i hope you find the love that you truly deserve. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions!! Enjoyed your first post. What is that line...."It's better to have loved and lost, then never to have loved at all." Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! I hope you enjoy your time here. We've got lots to keep you busy reading for years!  |
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Barbara Trautman Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 90 |
Pain is terrible and lost loves are the most dreaded of all pain. Good luck in replacing her with a new love. You sound young. Nice poem and very therapeutic to write about it. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~Welcome to Passions~ Matt, I like your first poem. Look forward to reading more of your work. Warm regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Matt I hope you enjoy Passions In Poetry. This is a really nice place, with lots of sweet, caring, compassionate people. I enjoyed reading your first post and hope to read much more......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Matt...Welcome to our family of friends. Enjoyed your first post. Take your time, look around and read, read, read. There are so many wonderful people here that write different styles of poerty and if you want to learn, check out the Poetry Workshop, it's lots of fun and a great place to feed your mind.We are all here to help each other. E mail our teacher Nan and she will give access to post in the workshop. Kick back and enjoy our home...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Matt, you are not alone, I too have been suffering this grief and my love for her only grows though I know it will never be true! (sad sigh) This is a touching debut, sweet friend, I LOVE IT! Welcome to Passions, sweet Matt, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matt, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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MattGarcia Junior Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 19Texas, USA |
thank you all very much for the warm welcome, and i truly appreciate your comments and encouragement. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well, I say you are one special person! good write...strong emotion... Welcome! |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Welcome! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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rainman Junior Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 21 |
"I gave her my heart, And she tore it apart." i liked these lines Matt... also i read this poem as a one who has suffered from the same pain years ago. seeing her with another one really hurts;doesn't it? thanks for your share.... |
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FLOWERGIRL Junior Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 40the woods of Pa |
hi matt i am new here too and your poem was one of the first that i found. i was really touched by your willingness to share. i have a friend that is kinda going through a similar situation. i was wondering if you would mind if i would share -love lost- with him. thanks and keep sharing your heart - it will bring you healing and happiness |
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MattGarcia Junior Member
since 2003-01-04
Posts 19Texas, USA |
no i dont mind you sharing it at all, in fact, please do, and i hope it does him some good. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading your thoughts...romantic love grows best when its appreciated and caressed...James |
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