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Lest we forget
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Lest we forget |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Lest we forget The passing breeze, gently swaying the palms trying to keep up and stay erect Lest we forget The bold moon shining ever so brightly on the cloudless night showing us the way Lest we forget The rolling surf bringing renewal as it kisses the shore and leaves its foam Lest we forget The childs innocence showing us hope an outreaching hand looking for guidance Lest we forget The lonely beaches in winter the isolation memories of a summers day hope for springs warmth Lest we forget The loneliness we feel on a crowded subway hopeless faces staring at humanity never to know kindness |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'll take the lonely beach over the subway any day... I enjoyed this - thanks for sharing it with us...  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
from coney to rockaway, i hear you, brooklyn boy in every shell i picked along the shore,thats on this shelf, i hear the childrens voices down by the bay |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love the beach...and your poem, too...Very good..  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bklynboy Less we forget the tree that grows in brooklyn, enjoyed. |
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hannah44 Junior Member
since 2003-01-05
Posts 11 |
forgetfullness... is that a sin? i say it is alright to forget- but wrong to be ungrateful for the memories you have had. very nice poem. thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some things cannot be forgotten good write |
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