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A Musing...
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A Musing... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Song of bird and stir of beast, sounds bounce clear from on the east, as rises monarch of the skies, echoes faint within his eyes. Restless promise unfulfilled; ghost shuffle of souls as yet unspilled, from forth dark night as black as hell, wind of the west spins ancient spell, deepest depths in anguish torn, rent usunder by new day's born. [This message has been edited by Tim (01-05-2003 12:18 AM).] |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Tim... You have captured my imagination with this poem. It can mean many things to the reader, which is what I like. Very visual images within your words. Enjoyed very much...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...And a fine good morning to you as well, Tim...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Just as this poem rises to the occasion, so does my pen... back to the novel! Thank you Tim... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and a very nice muse that is... M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tim A muse, is a muse, is a muse, enjoyed. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good, Tim. I enjoyed reading...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
very much enjoyed these visions. love, gemma xxxx  learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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