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Upon The Rain
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Upon The Rain |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Memories of touch still lie upon my fingertips Like the words remain upon quivered lips Echo tomorrow of yesterdays wine Step dance left and right all through the mind Promise of forever lay gentle upon the rain Beared cross of never, came screaming just the same Pillowed dreams give way to meanings unclear Leave vapor trails upon the soul, as they vanish into thin air Colossal deju-vu’s ring as if so surreal While others embrace the pain, learning how to feel I waited earth long through jaded thoughts of old Captured the permeated essence of your perfume, lived the story told And now the shadows dance inside my head Hovers as is if they are the stars where lovers words were said Immeasurable are the days, and the hours just the same For time has chosen the ways, as I have chosen the blame Only to await this sentence of fate The time of a kiss having passed with the hour Seems as if remembrance in song Will display once again, love we searched to find Was there before us…all along © 2002 Dennis Hicks 12/26/02 11:50 PM |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Nice Write. ThisDiamond |
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LADY_DEATH Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 105Fl |
See my tears!how poetic! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nicely done Dennis....good write.. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Dennis, I so enjoy your poetry. In this poem I like this: ..."vapor trails upon the soul"... and this: "For time has chosen the ways, as I have chosen the blame." not to mention, the rest of the poem, equally enjoyed as much. Warm regards Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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visitvenus Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 101PA, USA |
Touched my heart...beautiful write. -Venus |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I can say nothindg but WOW! Never be normal! |
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Barbara Trautman Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 90 |
Long ago my pain was as real. So beautifully said - wish I could have written it. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Dennis, This is a very beautiful love poem. I love it....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Thank you all so much for your kind words, they made my day!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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