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Barefoot ballet
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Barefoot ballet |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas 
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Let me barefoot ballet across the vineyard of your soul. I have but one want.. to know the Real Inside of you. Take a deeper dance With me while I separate the stems and the seeds. Let me touch you in all those organic places you have sheltered from the world. I can give of myself once your image flows untainted Share with me…and taste the purity of our vintage walk |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous picture here! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Salty...........   "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (01-02-2003 03:10 PM).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW, is he a lucky guy!! You think it will work with meadows too? we don't have vineyards overhere LOL Great poem Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
The wine of such an endeavor will I am sure become one of great value.. very nicely done. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Passing Shadows Thank you for dropping in and reading. Just trying to make sure I get to the core, so I there won't be any surprises  garysgirl Thank you sweet Ethel.... I really enjoyed your write today also. Titia Geertman I believe it will work in pasture...we have a lot of that here ourselves. Why don't you write one *S*. btw I love that name Titia. Thank you for reading me. [This message has been edited by Salty (01-02-2003 05:09 PM).] |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Cpat Got to get to the root of things to see what the fruit really bares *S*. Thank U for stopping in. Glad to see you back on board. ~Salty |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Enjoyed the sensual imagery here, Salty! |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Thank you midnitesun....I always injoy hearing from you. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hey Texas....the vineyards are in California, just ask Martie.... But the champagne is right here in your words... Yep, get to the core of the grape and see if it is seedless or not... Like this one... |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Magnus Well, I can dream about vinyards...can't I? *S* I drank some homemade wine before..but I wouldn't recommend it . Maybe i'll just stick with that champagne you mentioned. Thank you Magnus Man for stopping by. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Salty, Like this a great deal. Right from those very two first lines, it just keeps getting better and better... Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
barefoot?...with your toes showing....ya wanna borrow a rag?....cute write cute gal.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh I love this! Lovely images here! Much enjoyed. ~Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Beautiful Salty. Yes......we need to know what lies inside, at the very center.......so lovely it carries the reader with it... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey Salty girl...your words are so sensually nice... M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hope you didn't find any thorns in your soul after the dance.... |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Regards2U That was my intention...for things to get better, and if that includes my writing then thats the bestest  Thank YOu for reading and responding---------------------------------- Thank You JamesMichael for coming by...I'm glad you enjoyed ------------------------------------ Toerag Hey I love running around barefoot,and maybe I do need one of those toe rags....what exactly is one anyway???  ------------------------------------- Enchantress Thank you so much.....and thank u for stopping in to read. ------------------------------------ Gentle Spirit that was what I was trying to get to alright....the center. I don't need any surprises Thank you for reading me.----------------------------------- nakdthoughts Thank You Maureen, I appreciate the read and response. I surely enjoyed your last one as well. *S* In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Cpat lol well not yet anyway. I can use a toerag I've heard if I need one....that might stop the bleeding. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Salty A pretty salty write, but I loved it. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
And I love you loving it Seymour Tabin...thank you. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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rainman Junior Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 21 |
i saw the barefoot ballet in those lines. her passion really impressed me... all the best -rainman- |
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