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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-01-04 12:33 PM

in the rhythm of the rain,
dancing through the night,
i could feel you,
gently,
slipping inside,

between raindrops
and heartbeats,
the distance sheds,
the chains come loose,
the bond between
transcends time,

between raindrops
and heartbeats,
all thinking subsides,
i can hold your sweet face,
between my hands,
watch your brown eyes
melt away my doubts,

watch you surrender,
make you mine

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (01-04-2003 07:49 PM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-01-04 12:38 PM

inkedgoddess - to read this first thing this morning, well m'mmmmmm. But alas, mine are blue, drats...

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-01-04 01:09 PM

thanks bill,
this is a very loving heart, room for one more!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2003-01-04 01:15 PM

soothingly romantic

surely it will melt the wiles of that special someone

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-01-04 01:18 PM

Great one inked, full of passion an warmth.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

5 posted 2003-01-05 12:06 PM

very nice read and erotic in its own way.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2003-01-05 08:51 AM

smiling.

You brought back a certain lovely, lovely memory.

I thank you.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

7 posted 2003-01-05 10:35 AM

That was really good.

Never be normal!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-01-05 10:38 AM

I like this, but you probably knew us romantics would....

BTW, my Love's eyes are brown, too. We love gazing into each other's eyes.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

LADY_DEATH
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 105
Fl

9 posted 2003-01-05 10:51 AM

Very romantic!It melted me all the way down to the soul!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-01-07 03:58 AM

My favorite line,
"Make you mine." James

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