Open Poetry #24 |
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In the Dog House Again... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
It was not intended, but she was offended, so the piper I must pay. A slip of the lip, an innocent quip, and lordy must I pay. Piercing eyes in icy stare, frosting glasses with her glare, O' heaven must I pay. My darling wife, love of my life, My goodness I must pay. She is an angel; an avenging angel, mercy, mercy must I pay. A couch for bed, no supper, not fed, Gadzooks, how I must pay. I apologize, forgive my lies, Your hair's not turning gray. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
So Tim...as long as you can take a lap top with you into the doghouse, you'll be okay, but tsk tsk...me thinks you messed up big time! Happy New Year! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
grey, big deal, theres always bleach,at least she has hair, what about you, baldy? |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tim, this was really cute, to me...even if you did get into trouble... ![]() I loved the way you rhymed and the rhythm of it. I felt like I was skiiping along as I was reading it........ ![]() "Love makes the world go around" |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
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visitvenus Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 101PA, USA |
Hmmmmmmm, wonder who gave her that gray hair? Very amusing...hope there's some decent bedding in that doghouse (and that you're from somewhere warm!) -Venus |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
poor guy...hope you get outta that dog house soon, it's cold out there |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
heh heh heh... ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bet you won't slip that quip from loving lip again! |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it's a joy to read you. M |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Tim~ You always make me smile...this is just too cute. ![]() ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute one! |
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