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Tim
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0 posted 2003-01-03 10:43 PM



It was not intended,
but she was offended,
so the piper I must pay.

A slip of the lip,
an innocent quip,
and lordy must I pay.

Piercing eyes in icy stare,
frosting glasses with her glare,
O' heaven must I pay.

My darling wife,
love of my life,
My goodness I must pay.

She is an angel;
an avenging angel,
mercy, mercy must I pay.

A couch for bed,
no supper, not fed,
Gadzooks, how I must pay.

I apologize,
forgive my lies,
Your hair's not turning gray.

© Copyright 2003 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-01-03 10:46 PM


So Tim...as long as you can take a lap top with you into the doghouse, you'll be okay, but tsk tsk...me thinks you messed up big time!  Happy New Year!
inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-01-03 10:48 PM


grey, big deal, theres always bleach,at least she has hair, what about you, baldy?
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-01-03 10:56 PM


Tim, this was really cute, to me...even if you did get into trouble...

I loved the way you rhymed and the rhythm of it. I felt like I was skiiping along as I was reading it........

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Nan
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4 posted 2003-01-03 11:14 PM


... Chuckling...

visitvenus
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5 posted 2003-01-04 12:31 PM


Hmmmmmmm, wonder who gave her that gray hair?

Very amusing...hope there's some decent bedding in that doghouse (and that you're from somewhere warm!)

-Venus

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6 posted 2003-01-04 03:46 AM


poor guy...hope you get outta that dog house soon, it's cold out there
Severn
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7 posted 2003-01-04 06:39 AM


heh heh heh...

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Sunshine
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8 posted 2003-01-04 10:59 AM



Bet you won't
slip that quip
from loving lip
again!

Midnitesun
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9 posted 2003-01-04 11:09 AM


Is it dark in that doghouse? LOL at the imagery in this.
nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-01-04 11:09 AM


it's a joy to read you.

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vlraynes
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11 posted 2003-01-21 02:41 AM



Tim~
You always make me smile...this is just too cute.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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12 posted 2003-01-21 03:59 AM


cute one!
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