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0 posted 2002-12-21 01:08 AM


Soothe my soul in your silence
hold my heart in your hands
let me rest my weary head upon your shoulder
and for just one moment, still life’s demands

Speak not, of loving me
instead steal my breath away in kiss
soothe my soul in your silence
yes baby…….just like this…….

Let the night come find us
Spilling moonbeams upon our skin
Soothe my soul in your silence
Kiss me, kiss me again…..


~SEA~
© Copyright 2002 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-21 01:09 AM

Romance distilled

You do this too well!


Ed
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thank you Ed
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3 posted 2002-12-21 02:11 AM

put up and shut up, eh? coolies susanofer!
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4 posted 2002-12-21 02:16 AM

oh yeah, you know I like them smooches
shhhhhhh....
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5 posted 2002-12-21 02:25 AM

you know how to shut me up!

(rofl)
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6 posted 2002-12-21 02:31 AM

well Kissy Face it would be my pleasure to keep you quiet lol
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7 posted 2002-12-21 02:39 AM



(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you are a true romantic, yay, I'm so happy you're back, you are a delight to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira
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Noah, you are truly a sweetheart
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9 posted 2002-12-21 09:11 AM

SEA - now that's an invitation that one couldn't resist, as always....

BC
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10 posted 2002-12-21 10:32 AM

Smiling at the way you can silence all these men with one little kiss.
Always with such a romantic touch!
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11 posted 2002-12-21 01:04 PM

Lovely, Sea!

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12 posted 2002-12-21 01:12 PM

Very nicely done Susan!
You have truly been missed!
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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13 posted 2002-12-21 01:34 PM

Sue....ya could not have done it better,
no way!!  This is exceptional..
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14 posted 2002-12-21 01:58 PM

well, everyone said what I wanted to say here...a beautiful write!
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thank you all so much!!
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16 posted 2002-12-21 06:15 PM


(insert the sound of silence...)

  This is why I missed you!!!
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Cowboy....
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18 posted 2002-12-21 07:37 PM

LOVED IT
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19 posted 2002-12-21 07:37 PM

Sue,
Nights don't come any better than that! Nor does romantic poetry. Bless you being the romantic.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.
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20 posted 2002-12-21 09:46 PM

I love the way you do these.   

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn
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21 posted 2002-12-21 11:00 PM

Silence, golden. Your words Midas's touch.
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22 posted 2002-12-21 11:53 PM

So much can be said without saying a word.
Beautifully written.

Hugs Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)
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23 posted 2002-12-22 12:57 PM

What can I say.......  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  
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24 posted 2002-12-22 12:59 PM

thank you all so much
and Fee??? where have you been??? Or has it been me that's been gone too long (again) this time???
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25 posted 2002-12-22 04:17 AM

Speak not, of loving me
instead steal my breath away in kiss

when actions speak louder than words, though these words you've written are devine
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26 posted 2002-12-22 06:48 AM

What a way to be soothed
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27 posted 2002-12-22 09:37 PM

This is the you that I've been missing.

Is it any wonder?  

Absolutely breathtakingly beautiful~

Hugs SEA gal~
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28 posted 2002-12-23 02:45 AM

read this over again...it's such a beautiful piece
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29 posted 2003-01-21 03:38 AM


Susan~
This is beautiful.
It's good to read you again.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
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30 posted 2003-01-21 04:00 AM

glad this one came up again...I enjoyed it more the third time!

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (01-21-2003 04:00 AM).]
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