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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2003-01-09 02:53 AM

He woke
and saw my candles lit
and just because
I am "the witch"
he laughed a nervous
twittersnitch
and asked me
"Why would you have church?"

"I'm just praying" I seemed to hiss.
"Tonight I feel the needs of men."
And brusk he blew out all the flame
and said, "Tell them I said 'Amen.'"

"Candles can be lit again."
I warned him as he left the room.
"Who knows?" I laughed in dark to self,
"I could have prayed for you."

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (01-09-2003 02:54 AM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-01-09 04:04 AM

you write it so damn well. With eloquence and grace these words speak "up yours" to the fool

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-01-09 04:07 AM

lol! this is really cute...silly men!

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-01-09 06:25 AM

Ha! Love it....smiling here.....
Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-01-09 07:16 AM

youre the witch alright,
youre spooky tho, a bit.......but sweet and cute
i wish i could make certain people just dispappera, like fall off the earth, can u do this?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-01-09 07:22 AM

I heard the smack of this...

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2003-01-09 07:52 AM

I'm just praying" I seemed to hiss.
"Tonight I feel the needs of men."
And brusk he blew out all the flame
and said, "Tell them I said 'Amen.'"

"Candles can be lit again."
I warned him as he left the room.
"Who knows?" I laughed in dark to self,
"I could have prayed for you."
=================================

Let me get you some more matches baby....
and...someone should remind him...he cant blow out your rhymes

Moths dont care if the flame is real
The moth and flame got a sweetheart deal
Nothing fuels like flirtation
Like need, anger & desperation

A.M.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2003-01-09 08:19 AM

good morning ms
(wearing petrol after shave
and sporting my goatee braided
into a wick)
is it safe to enter?

enjoyed your wit
but you knew that
Dark

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2003-01-09 08:28 AM

Like it a lot

Charisma

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

9 posted 2003-01-09 09:04 AM

I love this!!!
But you should have known I would.

Blessed be.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-01-09 09:20 AM

serenity,
You blew me away with that twister.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2003-01-09 09:28 AM

No one flames better than our number one witch. Bet he thinks twice next time.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2003-01-09 09:40 AM

enjoy your read

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

13 posted 2003-01-09 10:11 AM

DAVE!!!

GIT OVER HERE AND KISS ME BABY!!!

Where the hell have you been?

Oooh. Hmmm...kiss me again.

Now why don't we have a

smilie?
OH. blush. We DO have a "tongue" smilie.

grin. (Scuse me folks--an old friend o ours is back in town.)

Missed you DS!

Oh.

thanks all...I had fun with this one. I do love working my um, metaphors. heh heh. grin

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (01-09-2003 10:27 AM).]

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

14 posted 2003-01-09 10:27 AM

Get a taste of religion. Lick a witch today.

bsquirrel

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since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

15 posted 2003-01-09 06:20 PM

No one's a match for your wit.
Pray for those who can't stand it.

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

16 posted 2003-01-09 06:29 PM

HA
you're so cute when you flame !

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

17 posted 2003-01-09 07:54 PM

serenity - a witches brew, twittersnitch...

BC

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

18 posted 2003-01-10 08:02 PM

I smile serenely and light the candles--AGAIN.

thanks all...bubble bubble toil and trouble...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

19 posted 2003-01-18 05:17 AM

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

20 posted 2003-01-18 08:47 AM

I have spare matches if that flame ever flickers. LOL, had to come back to this one again, it rocks!

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

21 posted 2003-01-19 01:14 PM

Serenity--Amen, not for the candle, but for the one that strikes the match.

Souls Shadow
Junior Member

since 2003-01-17

Posts 29

22 posted 2003-01-19 11:29 PM

""Candles can be lit again."
I warned him as he left the room.
"Who knows?" I laughed in dark to self,
"I could have prayed for you.""

you rock.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

23 posted 2003-01-21 03:54 AM

Karen~
I'm smiling big here.
Keep those candles burning, my witchy friend.
Hugs to you,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (01-21-2003 03:55 AM).]

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