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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
This was inspired by a thread I had in the Discussions forum, Thanks Brad for giving me the idea. It didn't turn out quite how I envisioned it but anyway... Sometimes sometimes I get sad and cry from dusk till dawn then the days routine will start again and I just carry on sometimes I get angry at stereotyped faces as people watch my partners wheels spin in public places sometimes I’m embarrassed when folks think who they see is special, kind and oh so brave but they would not be me sometimes if the people would only stop to glance then they would see that I’m just them in special circumstance |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we are all different, but alike in many ways. Good write, I enjoyed this. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Tash, I don't quite understand wxactly what this poem is about, having not read the thread in the Discussin Forum, but I do feel a lot of emotion from it. I think ther's a lot "written between the lines". I do really like the poem, because I could feel that it's from your heart. Thanks for sharing a part of you with us...  "Love makes the world go around" |
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