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Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

0 posted 2008-02-13 07:17 PM



Who are you?
Who am I?
Who are you to say its a lie?

What is it?
Is it I?
Is it all by and by?

Where are you?
Where am I?
Where is it that we fly?

When will I?
When will you?
When will all this be through?

Why are we?
Why are they?
Why are we the ones to say?

How can I?
How can you?
How can all this be true?

** can you all be so kind as to tell me what YOU think this is about and a title for it Please and thank you?

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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2008-02-14 05:03 PM


There's an old old poem that goes ...

I keep six honest serving-men
(They taught me all I knew);
Their names are What and Why and When
And How and Where and Who.


Maybe you could name your poem, "Six Honest Serving Men" or, perhaps, "Interrogation," since this is usually the case when these words are used.

Just a couple of ideas.

-Bob

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