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Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

0 posted 2003-02-01 11:49 AM

A Sure Thing

After thirty-seven years of marriage,
Now, in Intensive Care,
No further diagnosis needed,
He knows better than anyone else there,
After thirty-seven years of marriage,
What it is... Intensive Care.

-Lighthouse Bob

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-02-01 03:08 PM

And I am so sure Bob that you intensively care about your marriage and your God. Love, Joyce

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-02-01 06:30 PM

(smiles) Oh Robert, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, His love truly is everyones marriage and there is no more faithful husbandry than His own! (big hugggssssss) May every day to follow be filled with much care, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2003-02-02 03:35 AM

that just describes fully what a 37-year marriage is all about - caring intensively for each other.

BTW, have not been here for days - thanks for your tutorial on ballads. You're right there, just trying to make one is giving me nightmares. So I've done one, and hope I do your teaching justice. (The Tree)
I'lI welcome your comments

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2003-02-02 12:15 PM

I like this

I'm fifteen, but to know and understand a marriage is an amazing thing and yes, intensive care, That describes it well.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-02-02 02:09 PM

Very very true Robert.
Beautifully said.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

the_jazzician
Junior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 30

6 posted 2003-02-02 09:48 PM

thats sweet bob , really nice

i like everything i read here but your poetry stands out a little for me

"First remove the plank from your own eye so you can see better to remove the splinter from your brother's eye" - Jesus

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