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jenny
Junior Member

since 2006-03-30

Posts 45

0 posted 2006-04-05 05:28 PM

This  is how i  feel about life in general

WHAT A WONDERFUL WORLD

What a wonderful world this would be
If everyone could get on like you and me
This the way it should be
People standing here hand in hand working towards a better land.

No more Anger,no more fights.
people being allowed to stand up for there rights.
What a wonderful world this would be.
To live in a country thats free, if only people could see.
They don't need a killing spree

People out there have a right to survive,they shouldn't have to fight to be alive.
What a wonderful world this would be if everyone could catch this bug and to see it in there hearts to give a  stranger mighty big hug.

It would hopefully let people see what it's like to live in a country that is free just like you and me

I am a new poet to your club and i  am called jenny

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2006-04-05 05:53 PM

Hi Jenny, welcome to our corner. Yes it would be wonderful if everything was as you say and the only way we can accomplish such a goal is for each of us to do his part, however small. Love, Joyce

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-04-05 09:52 PM

Hi Jenny~
You're gonna get a big AMEN ! from me~

Welcome to our little poetic corner~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

3 posted 2006-04-05 09:59 PM

Sounds like heaven to me. Beautiful thoughts but I doubt we'll ever see them come to be while on this earth.

Welcome to Passions in Poetry.

Rae

jenny
Junior Member

since 2006-03-30

Posts 45

4 posted 2006-04-06 05:38 PM

Thank you for your kind words,I know i am in a good place it has taken me a while to get here.
But i am happy to be here now.
I will be back
god loves you all for excepting me into your fold
jenny

Musicmaker1969

Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

5 posted 2006-04-09 12:18 PM

Jenny, this is a great wish, almost a prayer. Remember that one day we will live in a world like this. It is just going to take us time to wait for the Father's call, that not even Jesus knows the time of. Your writing is beautiful and you have been given a great gift to encourage and uplift people. Very well done so far in what I have read of your work. We will one day live in your world.

Sheri Adams

Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!!
Sheri Liegh Adams
sheriliegh@sympatico.ca

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

6 posted 2006-04-10 09:54 AM

Dear Jenny,

This is beautiful

Love,
MiCheLLe

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues

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