I Could Try To Pen A Love Song

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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-10-28 04:41 PM

Picture by Josephine Wall

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I could try to pen a love song
With words straight from my heart
I'd tell the world about you
And of the love you did impart

I could try to paint a picture
But such a talent I don't possess
How I worship the ground you walk on
I love you, I must confess

I would climb the highest mountain
Just to be right by your side
You are my lover and my soulmate
Someone with whom I can confide

I'll dive into the deepest ocean
And sail the seas of sapphire blue
I would search the far horizons
In my quest to be with you

You are the left hand to my right
The jewel in my crown
Every color in my rainbow
Such a special love I've found

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

1 posted 2002-10-28 04:47 PM

Hi Sue, this picture is beyond stunning and you don't need to 'try.' You have penned a beautiful love song.

How are you? I haven't seen you for awhile.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-28 04:54 PM

Beautiful poem

Cold hands means a warm heart

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

3 posted 2002-10-28 05:54 PM

It's sweet music to my ears. "I'll dive into the deepest ocean" Thank you.

etoodog

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garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-10-28 06:23 PM

"I would climb the highest mountain
Just to be right by your side
You are my lover and my soulmate
Someone with whom I can confide

I'll dive into the deepest ocean
And sail the seas of sapphire blue
I would search the far horizons
In my quest to be with you

You are the left hand to my right
The jewel in my crown
Every color in my raimbow
Such a special love I've found"

Sue, this would make one of the most beautiful love songs I have ever heard. This is exactly how I feel about my Gary, as I'm sure many, many people do for their Love.
Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

Love To All,
Ethel

*Stubby*
Member

since 2002-09-19

Posts 122

5 posted 2002-10-28 06:33 PM

beautiful thankyou J ...*S*...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-10-28 06:49 PM

(smiles) Oh Sue, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, yes you can write beautiful love songs and every time I read your beautiful love poetry it makes me smile and sometimes even gets a song in my head! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-10-28 06:52 PM

Wonderful write Sue!
Very much enjoyed!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2002-10-28 07:38 PM

Very nice SueT....I once knew another poet
that enjoyed using the same graphic artist's
pictures....Equally as beautiful and such
a complement to the words..

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2002-10-28 08:39 PM

Suetang - you sure have someone special to write about your relationship like this. This is a very nice writing...

BC

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

10 posted 2002-10-28 09:24 PM

Sue~ Your beautiful words do sound like a love song. Your man is very lucky...Paul

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

11 posted 2002-10-28 10:10 PM

Sue: You are so fortunate to have found such a special love! Beautiful poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

12 posted 2002-10-29 01:04 AM

This is so very special, Sue...
The last verse especially... just blew me away
thanks for sharing it with us

~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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13 posted 2002-10-29 01:34 AM

I'm in awe of you Sue...so beautiful!

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