Ths stars will shine forever

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Open Poetry #23

Ths stars will shine forever

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

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0 posted 2002-10-15 07:22 PM

The stars will shine forever,
Before the sun comes up at dawn

And sadly we will never
get to see them when we're gone

The grass will grow forever
Until this planet dies

But human kind will never
Think to give it our goodbyes

The ocean roars forever
and crashes on the sand

And sadly it will never
Think to say goodbye to man

[This message has been edited by Wind (10-15-2002 07:40 PM).]

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

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California

1 posted 2002-10-15 07:26 PM

Yes, you are so right; human kind is so very fragile. Thanks for reminding me. And, thank you for the poem, a
reminder of all of nature, including us.

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

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A Mountain Paradise

2 posted 2002-10-15 07:34 PM

Ahh, the little things in life. One of my pet subjects.

Nice job on this. Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

majnu

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since 2002-10-13

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SF Bay Area

3 posted 2002-10-15 07:39 PM

the poem was nice. the images soft an pleasing. the explanation annoyed me though. let the reader figure it out.

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

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4 posted 2002-10-15 07:41 PM

ok majnu, I left the explanation out

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-10-15 07:44 PM

Nice post...lots of wisdom...welcome to
Passion's....enjoy..

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2002-10-15 08:42 PM

Wind, this is a very good work you have done. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing.

With Love To All,
Ethel

passing shadows
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7 posted 2002-10-29 01:32 AM

this is so awesome! It needs to go through again so more folks can read and enjoy! Thanks for sharing. This made me think.

Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

8 posted 2002-10-29 02:23 AM

I wondered over the space you created between the heavens and earth. I keep shaking my head and find your words ease my mind. Thank you.

etoodog

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