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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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When Shadows gray the time of day and Gold turns silver on the way. Fix your eye on the butterfly And colors will return your eye. Watch them feed on flowers yield See them hover above the field Stand amongst the greenery and Let your mind the peace you see. Give your thoughts unto the power That makes the butterfly and flower. Let its grace just take your hand Just feel a moments understand. There is a time and place for things Beyond our reality stings It’s all a matter of adjust But truly it is a must. Give grace each day moments blend and Transcend to a butterflies wend. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The renderings of contentment A very calming verse And of course, lovely as always Liz |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
'Morning, Mr. Seymour. How are you today? Thanks for this excellent poetry first thing this morning. I love it, as always, and I thank you very much. Love To All, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good Morning Sy! An absolutely beautiful and uplifting read this morning. ~Morning hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'll take your tidbit bit of when mix it with a sigh of then stir in cream with hint of honey and find that we're on the money... then I'll sit back to enjoy the messages that you employ... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There is a time and place for things Beyond our reality stings It's all a matter of adjust But truly it is a must. ================================= There is more self wisdom and truth in those 4 lines than this mere moth could ever justify with words...rhymed define of a lesson of life--that until learned and put into practice...keeps the moths from being butterflies...until the "art of adjust" is aquired...the moths keep flying blind..and tired. In the lines of your poetry...is found the widsom of self humilty that can set us free.     Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
sweet, sweet feel to this! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I'm sure you could do it better, thank you dear. Ethel, Thank you for the read and lovely reply. Enchantress Thank youand hugs back. Sunshine You are a bright delight this morning. JM, Let us help that state of bliss By sending you a helping kiss. On top of that we send a hug. To tuck you in all warm and snug. Randy insisted on writing that WWRS VAS Thank you sweet. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Seymour, this is so very true, sweet friend, your words always flitter like butterflies and reveals a parallel universe just on the otherside where all the answers of harmony co-exist! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - I like the butterfly meanings in this write, very nice... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Stand amongst the greenery and Let your mind the peace you see. These two lines for some reason, affected me deeply. The whole poem is lovely. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you for the understanding reply. Bill, Enjoyed your comment. Chris, Two of the best lines. Thank you. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very very lovely, Sy... Softly beautiful ~ butterfly hugsLyra |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Thanks I needed that. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, Yhanks for the bump and hug. RSWells You welcome and thank you. |
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