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rascalx
Senior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

0 posted 2002-10-19 11:37 PM

(v1)
It's the dream of her
     that keeps my soul intact
but it's the fear of repeating the same mistakes
that keeps my heart
     refusing to act
   On the feelings
   I know in my mind to be true
wonderfulhappinessdreams of you

(v2)
It's the wonder of her
     that my empty life lacks
but how much hurt can one dreamer take?
that keeps this heart
     holding back
   The feelings inside
   I long to share with you
wonderfulhappinessdreams of you

(Br.)
     You are pennies in the wishing well
     You're my starlight-starbright-shooting star
     Quick close my eyes and think of you
     And I'm right there beside you
                    wherever you are
      my wonderhappydream come true

(v3)
It's the thoughts of her
     that wake me at night
but I reach out into the empty space
that keeps this bed
     lonely and cold
   These feelings of warmth
   I need to give to you
wonderfulhappinessdreams of you

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-10-19 11:43 PM

WOW Jeff...I promised myself one more read before bed...
and did I pick the perfect one!
My oh my! This is wonderful! Oh yesss...
~Hugs, nite, sweet dreams~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2002-10-19 11:51 PM

Enjoyed reading this.

Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

3 posted 2002-10-20 09:01 AM

Schweeeeeeeeeet dreams!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-20 11:48 PM

(sigh) Oh Jeff, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may your love always bring happy wonderful sweet dreams to you and bring you great comfort forever! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jeff, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-10-20 11:51 PM

Jeff, this is a beautiful love song you have written here. I'd love to hear it with music. Thanks for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel....garysgirl

FuzzyFrazzledFraggle
Member

since 2002-09-20

Posts 155
Fraggle Rock

6 posted 2002-10-21 12:05 PM

Awww now I'm gonna cry!!!! Sweet blissful dreams...*sigh* Sorry don't worry about me I'm okie..lovely tho..tmd lovely..

Consider yourself fuzzed

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2002-10-21 12:17 PM

Well, you certainly got my attention with this wonderful poem. So many lines that are outstanding! Remarkable write!

Earth Angel

rascalx
Senior Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA

8 posted 2002-10-21 10:40 PM

Enchantress,
I am touched that I was the last poem you read before bed. Would that I could see your dreams!

(lol) Thank you; I'm glad you enjoyed.

Pat, sandpiper, Noah, EarthAngel,
Thank you for your wondeful compliments and words of kindness.

Glad you liked!

Ethel,
     Well, the music is in my head... now if I could just play it...... hmmmmmm (wanders off to piano to pick randomly at keys lol)

Fraggle,
      Care to share a box of tissues? lol

                            - Jeff

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

9 posted 2002-10-27 11:08 PM

"It's the dream of her
     that keeps my soul intact
but it's the fear of repeating the same mistakes
that keeps my heart
     refusing to act
   On the feelings..."

ah yes..of this i know...

its hard to know what thing is right, what thing is wrong..what to do...hmm...wish there was a true to goodness answer board somewhere..an instruction booklet, or some sort of map for every avenue of life..an answer..just an answer!!!  sometimes i dont personally even want choices--just answers!  lol...ok..done rambling....

great write, as usual...

hugs, g

"dont cry because its over, smile because it happened...!" -unknown

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