Open Poetry #23 |
In Fullness of the Spectrum |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Inspired by a pic of a lighthouse in the woods paired with a rainbow at it's side. It was a challenge to write of it without using the word rainbow. In Fullness of the Spectrum the spectrum of my life began in earnest when the light from my Lighthouse shone its glory illuminating my days, my path, brightening my heart and showing me unconditional love He became my prism refracting the essence of just whoHe intended me to be and as long as I allow myself His light as long as I open my eyes, my heart, my mind color fills my hours oh, help me in the shadow times to ever seek Your light ©October 27, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Virginia, this was a very good poem. I loved the way you wrote it and did the colors, too. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A beautiful job on this, Virginia... I think you met the challenge well, and the rainbow effect seeps right throught the words. I also love the form you used with the varied color letters... ~ rainbow hugs Lyra |
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Pezz1 Junior Member
since 2002-10-27
Posts 33Scotland |
Beautiful job, lovely words bold colouring, spectacular |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Vas, visually interesting, I enjoyed very much. Creative writing as well. SimplyGold |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Yay!!! Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love rainbows and have seen many lighthouses along Oregon's shore from Tillamook to Corvallis and they are breathtaking! (kiss on cheek) This is colorfully splendid, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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