Open Poetry #23 |
Just for You |
*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Just For You The day will come we will be as one That day I hope come true For on that daywill no longer bring Just smiles with thoughts of you Few have come and all have gone All have gone but you You'll no longer be just a new found freind For myheart I'll give to you Though from times gone by No more I wished to try And lonely will I be Then came you and said no more In pain no more be free You've warmed my heart Changed my mind And joy of life returned So this I say and say only to you For you I'll always be true J xoxoxoxoxoxoxox Always and Forever |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Wonderfully written! Bravo! Love, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I'm so happy for you and I wish this loves joy to always fill your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stubby, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Stubby, if you've read any of my poems about mine and my Gary's feelings for each other, you know how I love these romantic poems. This one is so heartfelt, friend. I loved it. thanks for sharing your heart with us. Love To All, Ethel P.S. I love the little graphics, too. I just don't know how to use them, yet. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi J! What a warm and hearfelt write this is! Beautiful romantic verse... Much enjoyed the sentiments here today. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
this is a very good use of words...I really liked the thought...(I say those same things to myself in the mirror every morning...and, I am the only one left for me...) |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Strong expressive write...this should melt hearts here in pip... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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