Open Poetry #23 |
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Just for You |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Just For You The day will come we will be as one That day I hope come true For on that daywill no longer bring Just smiles with thoughts of you Few have come and all have gone All have gone but you ![]() You'll no longer be just a new found freind For myheart I'll give to you Though from times gone by No more I wished to try And lonely will I be Then came you and said no more In pain no more be free You've warmed my heart Changed my mind And joy of life returned So this I say and say only to you For you I'll always be true J xoxoxoxoxoxoxox Always and Forever |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Morcastlin Member
since 2002-01-14
Posts 244The Jersey Shore, USA |
Wonderfully written! Bravo! Love, |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I'm so happy for you and I wish this loves joy to always fill your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stubby, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Stubby, if you've read any of my poems about mine and my Gary's feelings for each other, you know how I love these romantic poems. This one is so heartfelt, friend. I loved it. thanks for sharing your heart with us. Love To All, Ethel P.S. I love the little graphics, too. I just don't know how to use them, yet. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi J! What a warm and hearfelt write this is! ![]() Beautiful romantic verse... Much enjoyed the sentiments here today. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
this is a very good use of words...I really liked the thought...(I say those same things to myself in the mirror every morning...and, I am the only one left for me...) |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Strong expressive write...this should melt hearts here in pip... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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