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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

0 posted 2002-10-24 09:00 PM

For Michelle

You rock the water
sit down with stripe of tree
in shadow blessed
across the turn of day
you ripple in my memory
such a fragile pure display

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

1 posted 2002-10-24 09:04 PM

This touched my heart deeply, Martie...

~ loving hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2002-10-24 09:07 PM

A most beautiful visiting Martie.
ThisDiamond

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-10-24 09:08 PM

You, my dear,
have that unique ability
of making me glad I'm here,
and glad of where I will
someday be...

and for that, I thank you.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-10-24 10:15 PM

(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this touched my heart so very deeply and brought a tear to my eye! (sigh) Know Michelle will always be there for you, guiding you with her love as she is always family and will love you with all her heart forever! This is a beautiful sensitive dedication, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-10-24 10:25 PM

Martie...I think Karilea said it best..
so I will therefore echo her thoughts.
Beautiful write sweet lady.
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2002-10-24 10:37 PM

you ripple in my memory
such a fragile pure display

================================

and in turn your ripples intersect our hearts
thank you for that sweet poetess

Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining.

John O'Donohue
Conamara Blues

WhileIWasGone
Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 486

7 posted 2002-10-24 10:43 PM

Very Beautiful Martie...Hugs.

H.

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

8 posted 2002-10-24 10:43 PM

Tis a piece of history and very pretty to me. Thank you.

etoodog

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2002-10-24 11:54 PM

Pure, fragile, innocent, a clear and melodic stream of memories. Dear hugs to you, sweet friend

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

10 posted 2002-10-25 07:22 AM

this is sheer beauty

Severn
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since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

11 posted 2002-10-25 08:00 AM

Look lady, I've said it before - GO to a publisher...discuss...make book...

What do I have to do? FLY out there and do it all myself for ya? Heh..

K

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2002-10-25 11:48 AM

Martie...BEAUTIFUL..the picture, the thoughts, the words.....EVERYTHING. Thanks for sharing.

Love To All,
Ethel

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

13 posted 2002-10-25 02:11 PM

Ahh, getting your feet wet again were you? Look in your email, I am sending where I was yesterday to prove great minds think alike Martie. Only you could do it justice like this, only you!

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

14 posted 2002-10-25 03:17 PM

Martie - You are such a sweetie! This is a very nice poem.

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

15 posted 2002-10-25 05:28 PM

Martie...you are such a sweetie..very nice poem....(Hey wait....that old reprobate sailor said that...yuck!)...This is a wonderful write gal....

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