Open Poetry #23 |
A Christmas Verse |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A Christmas Verse On the spiritual time-line was planted a seed Twice a millennium ‘neath rafters of reed And a flower came forth in a small humble room From the center of mankind’s most delicate womb The universe sent down a song from afar And Love filled the stable with light from a star A beacon of wonder, a lighthouse to men Off the shores of despair in an undertow’s blend A cradle of glory, a trundle of life Sent out lifelines to pull in the weight of their strife Just a sweet newborn child, just a small naked boy Was the purpose for faith and the reasonfor joy Two thousand the times that the hourglass turned Two million the times that a candle was burned A hundred white lights shine upon you and me Through millenniums’ branch on an evergreen tree Elizabeth Santos October 25, 2002 [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (10-25-2002 05:36 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, sweet friend, you know how I love Christmas so much and you paint His magical birth and the love and spirit of the holiday so well here, God Bless You! (kiss on cheek) Your wonderful words always bring holiday cheer every day of the year, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Really nice write gal.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, A delightful write and a wonderful read. Thank you for posting. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A wonderful verse for any season. *S* This is beautiful. |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
This is just so beautiful! I may have to send out a few Christmas E cards from this one! Thanks for reminding me of the true meaning of Christmas, although I notice that like the department stores your getting an early jump on things!!LOL Peace,love,light and happiness Tammy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Noah - your warm comments are always appreciated Toerag. I hope to see your beautiful Chrismas poem posted between now and CHristmas, It is certainly worth another look for thosee who already know of it. and a new gift for those who haven't read it THanks for your note Love ya LIz Sy- Thank you, dear for you gentle comments Suthrn, Thank you for commenting on this [poem. Your thoughts alwayss mean so much to me [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (10-25-2002 10:07 AM).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Tammy, Thank you. I am honored that you want to share this poem . Thank you Liz |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Liz, I am never, ever disappointed when I read your beautiful poems. And this one dear lady is no exception. What a wonderful reminder of the 'reason for the season.' Blessing to you ... Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
I can see this on a Christmas Card. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Lady Santos, you shall place this in our Holiday Forum to light our December when the time comes, for this, my dear, is both a and a |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I felt like a kid you reading me this to me on the phone -darn near hung up my stocking on the fireplace afterwards - but not quite! (never too early to plan ahead) LOL |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Elizabeth, this is so beautiful. I know I've probably told you before, but you are a very talented lady and I love your poetry. When I read this work, it made me feel so humble. Thanks for sharing. Love to All, Ethel |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Elizabeth, This is a simply beautiful poem, penned with your talented touch, it does become more than just words .Thank you. Doc |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elizabeth...This is such a beautiful and inspiring piece. Much enjoyed in any season! ~Hugs & luv, Nancy~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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