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cjohnson/poet2079
Junior Member

since 2002-07-31

Posts 35
va(757)

0 posted 2002-10-25 04:10 PM

Is this love for real?
What I feel...
an overwhelming sense of fullfillment,
an emotional surge that engulfs
the very essence of my affection;
the existance of my love extends
beyond the realm of time...
the love we shared
is forever etched within
the corridors of my mind...
What I feel is real
What about this love???

poetry is "echoes of the heart"
eyssence

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-25 04:14 PM

This is a good poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-25 04:50 PM

J...It sure sounds to me like the feelings in your heart are real. I hope so. Thanks for sharing this fine poem. I liked it.

Love to All,
Ethel

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

3 posted 2002-10-25 05:06 PM

Sometimes it's kinda like pneumonia...and if ya keep feeling this way....ya need to take a few 10mg hydrocodones, chase it with some tequila...and, if ya wake up and still feel this way....by golly it's probably love... (if ya take this prescription and feel any way other than ill....you have to be in love...)

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

4 posted 2002-10-25 05:42 PM

Love can knock you out literally.
I almost blacked out once myself!

Nice poem!
Thanks for sharing.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-10-25 08:38 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh C.J, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I have missed your words so much and this brought a tear to my eye as you feel troubled inside! (sigh) I hope this isn't a current feeling for I wish nothing but loves true happiness to always sing in you because you are so deserving of it, keep your chin up as love always finds a way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet C.J, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

6 posted 2002-10-25 08:44 PM

It is the overwhelming, the etching and the emotional surge that surely convinced me. I love this poem.

Thanks,

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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