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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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From the Notebook Her roses rearranged spreading out in form splendor colors jumbled upon reflection Sometimes I can sense the tears they come for reason through endless claim colored glass debris kaleidoscope connection Beneath her knees untouched ground yellow thorns gathered -- petals amidst earth tender soft Her stars scatter the sky oceans roll together -- tremendous thought The raven lifted his alter draped in purity snow sparkles the dancing lessons have ended I offer nothing Only that which you are held forgotten Deep inside the stillness |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I have missed you and your gorgeous words sooooooo much, I'm so happy you're back, yay!!! This is sad but filled with so much color and beauty and imagery like your kaleidoscope heart always shines with, this is bright as prism, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lauren - how nice to read your lovely words again. Wonderful. Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lauren~As beautiful as ever... More please...? ~Hugs sweet poetess~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful imagery, Lauren... and a sad but lovely piece...  ~ loving chipmunk hugsLyra |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Don't mind me. I'll just be sitting over here sighing enjoying this over and over again. "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sitting here waiting for chapter two. Will someone please turn the page?  Nice seeing a new post by you, dear friend. The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Lauren, I just love your writing... I know I know I always say that.. but what else is there to say? You are amazing Hugs Tara |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sometimes I can sense the tears they come for reason through endless claim colored glass debris kaleidoscope connection =============================== only that lovely poetic mind of yours could come up with those images for tears and the reasons for them.... I, too have missed reading your magic ... hope all is well with you my butterfly sister. Love your new signature....  Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
To sweep up, fire, melt and make new. Such is life, and eternity. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lauren, I love the way you wrote this...the thoughts, the words, the form. It is beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, Classic you still pleasing the senses. Beautiful. Miss ya' and thrilled you're still here.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lauren it is good to see your beautiful words again my friend. Again you have gifted us with your grace of words. Hugs you. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
quote:LOVE this. Rockin' and all that. Breathy vignette you have here cutie. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - you write with such desire and beauty... BC |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
I love your passion and the imagery of your words. You are an artist. SimplyGold |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ah, but to be within the mind of the poetess as she spins such lovely visions before her eyes.....and gives them to us.. That we might see the colors, hues and the feel of words dancig before us... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love your experiments with type and with wording. . . they make the poems really speak even more than you could imagine. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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texasrose Member
since 2001-10-24
Posts 146 |
Her stars scatter the sky oceans roll together How lovely! |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
You weave your words so beautifuly. I enjoyed this. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Unbelievable ache. |
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