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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-10-24 10:02 PM


From the Notebook

Her roses rearranged
      spreading out
in form       splendor
colors jumbled
upon reflection

Sometimes    I can sense the tears
they come for reason
through endless claim

colored glass debris

kaleidoscope connection

Beneath her knees     untouched ground
yellow thorns gathered --
     petals   amidst  earth     tender         soft

Her   stars scatter the sky
oceans roll together
--
         tremendous thought

The   raven    lifted
his alter draped in purity

snow sparkles  

the dancing lessons have ended


I offer nothing
Only  that which you are

held
    forgotten

Deep inside the stillness
........I can hear you speak
You're still an inspiration
........To me

© Copyright 2002 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-10-24 10:08 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I have missed you and your gorgeous words sooooooo much, I'm so happy you're back, yay!!! This is sad but filled with so much color and beauty and imagery like your kaleidoscope heart always shines with, this is bright as prism, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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just out of reach
2 posted 2002-10-24 10:11 PM


Lauren - how nice to read your lovely words again. Wonderful. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-10-24 10:13 PM


Lauren~As beautiful as ever...
More please...?
~Hugs sweet poetess~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-10-24 10:15 PM


Beautiful imagery, Lauren... and a sad but lovely piece...
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-10-24 10:51 PM


Don't mind me. I'll just be sitting over here sighing enjoying this over and over again.

"two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light
a duet done with passion"

excerpt from "I Love You"

Auguste
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6 posted 2002-10-24 11:51 PM


Sitting here waiting for chapter two.  Will someone please turn the page?     Nice seeing a new post by you, dear friend.

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

rosepetals25
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7 posted 2002-10-25 12:39 PM


Lauren,

I just love your writing... I know I know I always say that.. but what else is there to say? You are amazing

Hugs
Tara

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8 posted 2002-10-25 07:15 AM


Sometimes    I can sense the tears
they come for reason
through endless claim

colored glass debris

kaleidoscope connection

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only that lovely poetic mind of yours could come up with those images for tears and the reasons for them....
I, too have missed reading your magic ...
hope all is well with you my butterfly sister.


Love your new signature....

Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining.

John O'Donohue
Conamara Blues

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The heart of you
9 posted 2002-10-25 08:27 AM


To sweep up, fire, melt and make new.  Such is life, and eternity.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

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10 posted 2002-10-25 01:16 PM


Lauren, I love the way you wrote this...the thoughts, the words, the form. It is beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Love To All,
Ethel

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11 posted 2002-10-25 01:23 PM


Lauren,
Classic you still pleasing the senses. Beautiful. Miss ya' and thrilled you're still here.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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12 posted 2002-10-26 06:46 PM


Lauren it is good to see your beautiful words again my friend.  Again you have gifted us with your grace of words.  Hugs you.
Christopher
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13 posted 2002-10-26 07:08 PM


quote:
The   raven    lifted
his alter draped in purity
LOVE this. Rockin' and all that. Breathy vignette you have here cutie.

Bill Charles
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14 posted 2002-10-26 07:33 PM


Greeneyes - you write with such desire and beauty...

BC

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15 posted 2002-10-26 09:56 PM


I love your passion and the imagery of your words. You are an artist.

SimplyGold

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16 posted 2002-10-27 10:07 AM


Ah,  but to be within the mind of the
poetess as she spins such lovely visions
before her eyes.....and gives them to us..

That we might see the colors, hues and
the feel of words dancig before us...

Sven
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17 posted 2002-10-27 05:41 PM


I love your experiments with type and with wording. . . they make the poems really speak even more than you could imagine. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

texasrose
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18 posted 2002-11-05 08:08 AM


Her   stars scatter the sky
oceans roll together


How lovely!

sigheyes
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19 posted 2002-11-05 08:11 AM


You weave your words so beautifuly.  I enjoyed this.
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20 posted 2002-12-19 01:13 PM


Unbelievable ache.
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