Open Poetry #23 |
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Nothing is as Beautiful... |
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JediRaver Junior Member
since 2002-08-16
Posts 23ATL, GA, USA |
Nothing is as beautiful as looking deep into your eyes and when I fall within them your soul and mine connect and at that very instant you become the heaven that I've searched for my whole life more pure than undying love more real than life itself In you I feel tranquility In you I am alive There is no other sacred place that can exist within this universe then the space I share with you as the light reflects your very soul and fills me here no longer am I alone the distance that was there before Fades away forever...drifts and disappears. The elation that bursts forth from me reflects in you and shatters all my fears. I pray that my imperfections and faults are hidden from your sight... so you'll never see how vulnerable I truly am...without you near so hard to bare...whenever I'm alone Nothing is as beautiful as awakening upon a sunlit morning holding you in my arms drinking from a fountain of Laughter...that never shall run dry but flow on forever... and shall never let you cry I want to make you smile time and time again I never want to see you hurt another second in your life because in you I've found my happiness In you my saving grace and how I yearn to be with you always for every single second that I draw breath tonight and as that light shines upon our morning faces I shall yearn for you every moment that the miles shall keep us apart as I shall cherish every second that we are together in my heart because nothing is as beautiful as you are to me... and nothing is as perfect as the moments we have shared together and the moments that have yet to be! -Jedi |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JediRaver Junior Member
since 2002-08-16
Posts 23ATL, GA, USA |
any replies or comments would be greatly appreciated -thanx |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggssssssss) Oh Ryan, I can understand these emotions ever so well, sweet friend, it takes a lot of courage and strength nowadays to hang onto love but if a love is true it can endure and with a golden heart such as yours I know you will prosper and in the end all will be compensated with the tears you feel! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ryan, thank you for sharing! ![]() May loven and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Love is truly a beautiful thing, as is this write! Keep posting. Tammy |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
makes me think of appreciating the simple things in love. Lovely.. "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ryan, the beauty of this poem has made me speechless..very unusual for me. Thanks for sharing. Love To All, Ethel |
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