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Open Poetry #23

Suppose Appreciating,Wonder You're Mine

Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

0 posted 2002-10-23 09:39 PM

Appreciating you're mine
make up in a dew
Appreciating you're mine
on first day break
Twas no so lo go
Ah be calling home
Kindness makes me so pink
And missing ya for a mistake
Suppose--
Wonder--
The evening dress you wear
Behind a sincere tear
To bottom all fear
Around best years
Forever Crimson dear
Forever Forested deer

etoodog

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-10-23 10:49 PM

(smiles) Oh Robert, this is beautiful, sweet friend, the way you describe love is so surreal and unique, you have brought a whole new tapestry of inspiration to all our hearts, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-10-23 10:57 PM

This is very sweet

Cold hands means a warm heart

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2002-10-24 12:07 PM

Missing you for a mistake

I like the way you said that and I enjoyed your poem very much...... good stuff!!!!

and welcome here~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-10-24 02:43 PM

Interesting format...a surprise wrapped in pretty paper. ThisDiamond

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-10-24 03:09 PM

Very nicely done Robert.
Much enjoyed!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
So you won't ever forget me ~

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

6 posted 2002-10-24 07:33 PM

Robert, really enjoyed the read.

The ladders of life that we scale merrily Move mysteriously around So that when you think you're climbing up, man In fact you're climbing down-Nick ca

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

7 posted 2002-10-24 11:01 PM

Robert

Interesting and tender...enjoyed! PS Welcome to passions!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-10-24 11:05 PM

Twas no so lo go
Ah be calling home

~*~

This...
is a song
in slo mo...

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